Oh Sehun

[juuten]

Title: Oh Sehun
Author: juuten
Genre: AU, Angst, Romance
Rating: PG-13
Pairing: Kai/Luhan, Sehun/Luhan (one-sided), Baekhyun/Sehun
Summary: Sehun knows what Jongin does to Luhan. He knows where the bruises are coming from.

A/N: I got drunk, and this happened.

Comments

[fromearthtostar]

After I finished reading this, I was struck with how meaningful it is. I mean, in a weird way it's like one of those stories where you learn about someone's recovery and rediscovery of how great they are, and how they aren't as worthless as they thought they were. Does this make sense? :S

At first I thought it was an angst fic, but I really, really loved how you did the ending.

I don't think Sehun and Luhan had depression, but that's the first thing that popped into my mind. It's that disorder where the patient needs to feel some sort of abuse in order to feel like he or she has gained the wanted attention, right? Sorry, that might sound a bit weird.

Love it! Thank you for writing it <3

[juuten]

your comment is so insightful :D i feel so giddy >.< i never thought it would come out that way...i should drink more often O___O XD kidding

in my mind, it wasn't supposed to have a happy ending...but yeah it evolved into that because I was already happy by the time I wrote the ending :))

nope, they don't have depression (no, wait, sehun has a little bit of that)...they both have a type of personality disorder...for luhan's case, your theory is close :D

thank u for reading this!!! :) thank u thank u thank u :)

[juuten]

wow thank u! :D idk it was supposed to have a sad ending where someone dies but it turned into...that fluffy, happy thing XD i'm glad u liked it though :>

thank u thank u thank u for reading!!!! :)

[mayumi_san]

Words will not explain my feels. Dndjishdsidi /dies

<3 ily. :))

[juuten]

hihihi :> thank u thank u so much for reading this!!! :D ily2 :))

[re_lla]

ok .. i just run out of tissue paper because of you and this damn amazing yet deeply moved fiction ............
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[juuten]

awwwww sorry about your tissues :(( were u really deeply moved by this? :D wow thank u so much! i really appreciate it :)

thank u thank u for reading!!!

[akuiaku]

hey!! This is actually really good!!!
I like the way u r telling the story
Its different from a lot of things out there n actually unique n refreshing!!
N omg I hope there will b mayb kai version of this? X:
I think that would b really great >_<
Great job!! *thumbs up*

[juuten]

kai version? hm...never really thought about that XD but that's a really good idea! i'll try making kai's version :> thank u for the idea :D

i'm glad u like this :) i'll try to make kai's version even better

thank u for reading!!! :)

[juuten]

hihihi :D thank u!

and nope it's not that :)) i'm glad you like the story :D

thank u thank u thank u for reading!

[tricia1214]

this is really wonderful :)
i love how you managed to keep the feeling light despite the theme that surrounds it.
i love how subtle everything is, and i love that you talked about this, coz it really happens.
thank you for sharing this with us ^^