Dewdrops

[jycdartmniax]

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OH HEY THERE BEAUTIFUL FIC. NICE TO MEET YOU. YOU COME HERE OFTEN? NO. WELL I THINK YOU SHOULD.

[grapefruitade]

finally getting around to reading this /late
BRB READING/SPOTTING/FLAILING.

Re: OH HEY THERE BEAUTIFUL FIC. NICE TO MEET YOU. YOU COME HERE OFTEN? NO. WELL I THINK YOU SHOULD.

[grapefruitade]

SO THIS IS WHY I WAS INBOXED WITH THE NEWS THAT YOU HAD UPLOADED ANOTHER USERPIC AND IT WAS A JONGYU ONE AND... YEAH. YEAH. SO. YEAH.

“Minho, go with him.”
“It’s my birthday, too...”
POOR MINHO. IT'S OKAY BB. SPEND SOME KOALA TEA TIME WITH KIBUM.

your descriptive language, blargh. "too much" you say. "wonderful and almost flawless" I say.
His voice is soaked with weary, the choice to use "weary" threw me off a bit; I think it's because I imagined a noun instead of an adjective. this might just be my personal preference; if you meant to use weary, then alright, haha~
the only evidence of their company the obvious food, who's company? the tiles? the teenagers? the pronoun here is a little confusing.

AND THEN THE JONGYU FLASHBACK ASLKDFJDSKFJ /my creys
AW ONEW YOU WONDERFUL LEADER YOU. I LOVE YOU.
(I spazzed; was that a subtle weaving in of the time jongyu both had swine flu?)
BUT YEAH. I SPAZZED AND FLAILED AND EVERYTHING WAS WONDERFUL AND NOTHING HURT.

OH AND I HOPE YOU WRITE THE OTHER PARTS. HEHEHEHEHEH.
\O/

Re: OH HEY THERE BEAUTIFUL FIC. NICE TO MEET YOU. YOU COME HERE OFTEN? NO. WELL I THINK YOU SHOULD.

[jycdartmniax]

OK. thank you for your feedback ; A ; i'll fix those haha. yeah i see what you mean..>D i'll get to that after i'm done with my sci proj ^^

OH REALLY? i was worried about the flashback being to strange lol. (and yes, it was haha.)

YOU FLAILED? YOU SILLY YOU. PFF.

LOL ok.e.y. i'll get to em next year :D