Unrequited Love (Oneshot)

Jun 16, 2015 22:44

Title: Unrequited Love
Pairing: HikaDai
Genre: failed fluff
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 3000+
Summary: Hikaru and Daiki are childhood friends but Hikaru has special feelings for Daiki. Is he just a friend to Daiki or is he more than that? <-- lol sorry, I’m really bad at writing summaries XD
Note: I’m sorry for any grammar mistakes. And it’s actually ( Read more... )

oneshot, hikadai, arioka daiki, yaotome hikaru, fanfic

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tasuku_kyota June 17 2015, 08:48:07 UTC
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OOOOOOMMMMMMGGGGGGG
*shed a tear*
*kissing you for this*

yaddaaaa this is full of fluff and sugar and sweet ughhhh /chewing pillow/
when hika wiped dai's messy cream, when dai secretly kissed him, ugh
my heart is in danger now
omg, one of my ultimate otp
hikadai FTW!!! ughhhhh thanks for this dear!!

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jyj4everfan June 17 2015, 18:34:57 UTC
I'm glad you like it ;-;
Haha yes, I made it really fluffy because I love fluff lol but I hope it didn't become too cheesy though XD
I really like Hikadai too <3 I always find it cute whenever I see them together :3
Thanks to you too for reading :D

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juju905rote June 17 2015, 08:48:20 UTC

This is so cuteeee!! Hikadai are so cute!!
The beginning w/ the dream was so funny! And ut was cute how they thought of confessing at the same time :) and when Daiki said he kissed Hikaru in his sleep, I melted.
Thanks for writing, Lorelly, and dont worry ur writing is really good! I hope you write more~

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jyj4everfan June 17 2015, 18:25:41 UTC
Thanks for reading~ I thought no one is going to read this actually lol

I'm glad you found this cute ;A; And yes, I was actually giggling while writing the confession part and the part where Daiki confessed that he kissed Hikaru while he was asleep (even though I was the one writing this XD).

Actually, I decided to write this because of the talk we had on fb before. You know how hikadai didn't have that much fanfics D: So I thought I wanted to write something about them :3 I hard a hard time thinking how to start and end this though since I didn't really planned the plot. I just went with the flow while writing this XD

I'll try to write more :3 I really want to write something about InooDai, something fluffy haha :D

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juju905rote June 17 2015, 19:16:01 UTC
Of course I will read it :) I love this hikadai.

Yes I remember our chat, that's why I'm so happy you wrote this! And really, you will write Inoodai?? Please do, I can't wait ;_; And of course it should be fluffy, cus they're so fluffy and cute ;_;

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jyj4everfan June 17 2015, 23:00:19 UTC
Yes, I'm planning to :3 Well, actually I already started writing it, I just need an ending ;A;

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riiakabunbun June 17 2015, 12:37:26 UTC
(>/////////////////////<) aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ; v ;
congrats hikaru for escaping the friendzone ; v ;
hikadai is not really my otp but THIS IS SO CUTE i just cant ; v ;
lolitan thank u for making me read fanfics again i hope u would write more (so that i could also read more ; v ; )
this is so cute i cant forget any single cuteness of their pairing in this story ; v ;

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jyj4everfan June 17 2015, 17:59:57 UTC
Haha yes, congrats to Hikaru for escaping the friendzone XDD
Hindi rin sila isa sa mga main otp ko pero kasi may soft spot ako pag dating sa kanila haha. Nakukyutan ako sa kanila eh lol :3
Grabe nga eh, ilang edit ang ginawa ko dito kasi hindi ako satisfied (tsaka naka public sya, nakakahiya sa mga makakabasa XD).
Titignan ko kung makakapagsulat pa ako ng iba ;A; And hirap mag isip ng plot eh >< (Actually, may sinulat akong InooDai pero naging nakakalungkot yung kwento lol at ayaw ko ng ganun gusto ko happy ending para sa kanila ;A; At meron akong multi-chap fic na sinusulat para sa Tadaiki pero ayaw ko pang ipost kasi gusto ko munang tapusin para sigurado haha).

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riiakabunbun June 22 2015, 05:07:52 UTC
yay nakaka-excite ; v ;

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lilly0 June 19 2015, 11:51:39 UTC
This was very cute and adorable <3
Thanks for sharing!!!!!!

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jyj4everfan June 19 2015, 19:29:28 UTC
I'm glad you found this cute ;A; I really tried writing this as cute as possible but I was not sure if it was successful >< XD
Thank you so much for reading :D

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sakuranbo0o June 19 2015, 16:11:07 UTC

Chooo Kawaiiii~....(๑^ں^๑)
Otsukaresam~....(^O^)
I become to ship this pair LoL~....XD♡
Thank you for this fic....♡

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jyj4everfan June 19 2015, 19:37:58 UTC
You're welcome :D
Thanks also for reading :3
Aren't they adorable? I always love it when I see them together <3 (even though they are not my main otp haha)

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