Regards the Labyrinth movie, I don't think I've seen it. But I thought your fic was fairly interesting all things considered. The pace moves along fairly well, and you seem to have a fairly good amount of detail. What can I say... I likes me some adjectives. *chuckles*
I find it lacks something. Hmmm... I'm sure during an editing session I'll figure out why I dislike the way this fic is worded so much. Maybe I'm just being overly critical. I tend to do that. Maybe I will scrap it and start over. I've done that more times than I can count with some stuff I've written. Who knows. Maybe my muse will get bored of this fic and it'll end up in the heap with the rest of my unfinished works. :\ *wishes for a muse without ADD*
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The pace moves along fairly well, and you seem to have a fairly good amount of detail. What can I say... I likes me some adjectives. *chuckles*
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