:O! The betrayal was so good! Omg, I need to read this over about a thousand times to get it. The crossover between 8uppers and Inception works so well xD Thank you anon!
OMG, this is really brilliant! Just when I thought everything was going well and they're going to live happily ever after, that twist happened. Totally didn't expect that and then when Mac woke up and Johnny acted like nothing happened- it totally broke my heart.
And I really love the feel of the whole story and your characters are really spot-on . I especially love the card game scene. The interactions between the characters is just so wonderful and everything is perfect.
Thank you so much for writing this. I love it.
And seriously, 'It probably deserves a much more epic treatment' - it's absolutely fine the way it is.
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And I really love the feel of the whole story and your characters are really spot-on . I especially love the card game scene. The interactions between the characters is just so wonderful and everything is perfect.
Thank you so much for writing this. I love it.
And seriously, 'It probably deserves a much more epic treatment' - it's absolutely fine the way it is.
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