Gift fic for yue_akuma
Title: New Rule
Pairing/Characters: Hina/Ohkura/Yoko
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Spanking
Notes: Dear yue_akuma, a little birdy told me you might like something a little on the kinky side; I hope this suffices. :D Thanks to my cheerleaders and beta-readers. ♥
Summary: Yoko gets a new rule to follow. An AU.
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Pairing/Characters: Hina/Ohkura/Yoko
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Spanking
Notes: Dear yue_akuma, a little birdy told me you might like something a little on the kinky side; I hope this suffices. :D Thanks to my cheerleaders and beta-readers. ♥
Summary: Yoko gets a new rule to follow. An AU.
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I like the "rule" concept. :}
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a little birdy told me you might like something a little on the kinky side
Mwahahaha, your birdy is awesome then~! <3
First of all I giggled madly at the first 2 lines, because, really, writing down that Yoko can't run away, so epic XDDDD
AND THEN YOKO FREAKS OUT, because, well, it's YOKO, and he can't not freak out at a point or another, lololol. OMG so awesome. ♥
"We're adding a new rule," Hina says. He looks thunderous, barely contained, and Yoko's mouth waters inappropriately.
DUDE, SAME. *___*
he feels simultaneously anxious and excited about how Hina and Ohkura are going to make him remember another rule
OMG ME TOO OMGGGGGGG *______*
Yoko isn't allowed to wear clothes in the bedroom (it's another rule)
HOLY HELL I LOVE THIS RULE VERY FREAKING MUCH :Q_________________
Ohkura takes each piece from him as he takes them off and then drops them on the floor by the wall, which would make Hina ( ... )
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Hina's hand comes back wet, though if it's from tears or sweat Yoko doesn't know; he doesn't remember crying but even now he's just a mass of arousal and nerve endings firing at random. He probably missed a lot.
AWWWWWWWWWW YOKOOOOOOO~! <33333
In answer to both of them, Yoko closes his eyes and opens his mouth.
BEST. ANSWER. EVER. <3
"This is awful," Yoko complains
LOL a Yoko not complaining wouldn't be a nice Yoko ♥
The taste of Ohkura's come in his mouth flavors his words, and he thinks, New rule, new rule, new rule.
OH BOY. I can't stop making starry eyes at the screen! <3
Hina leaves the room and comes back with a damp washcloth in his hand--his right hand, the hand he must has been hitting Yoko with--and a lit cigarette dangling from his mouth.
lajbgrlzkhjglkzjhbenuc ug iohfboiuebguozkahebfk THE VISUAL oh damnit *______*
When he pulls back, the slick traces of what Yoko immediately imagines must be Ohkura's come on his own lips is hypnotizing.
MOAAAARRRRR INCREDIBLE VISUAL, ftw! ( ... )
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You did an incredible job! :D Thanks again! :DDD ♥
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My heart clenched a bit at the beginning at how worthless Yoko felt.
I'm not even going to mention how hot the spanking was :D
Thanks for writing this amazing fic, Anon-san!!!!!
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I love that not only do they have rules, they've actually written them out and put them up on the wall, so Yoko can't forget ♥
sure, he wasn't exactly fine when they found him, but that had just been an especially low point in a series of drops in Yoko's quality of life. He would have bounced back eventually, and he can't imagine he's doing that much for the two of them beyond getting in their way and fucking up their home.
omg yokoooooooo ;__;
"We're adding a new rule," Hina says. He looks thunderous, barely contained, and Yoko's mouth waters inappropriately.
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm :9
Ohkura's tall shadow
I really like this phrase, idky
Yoko isn't allowed to wear clothes in the bedroom (it's another rule)
the best rule! (that said i am so interested in what the other rules are, yes)
His one concession to whatever they're about to do appears to have been taking off his socks, which, whatever.
lololol Hina :D
"No," Hina says, and then ( ... )
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