A piece of Eighto for phoenix_soar

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Eighto gift-fic for phoenix_soar

Title:A gentle company
Pairing: Yokoyama/Ohkura
Rating: PG-15
Warnings:This is the first fanfic I publish, and making it made me realize ho hard it is to make a pg-15 story; honestly I wanted to go far and beyond with this, even though the beginning was difficult for me, I felt more inspired towards the end, but of course I

Comments

[phoenix_soar]

Hi, thanks for writing this for me, Anon. I know I requested very rare pairings, so that might have been challenging. ^^;

This fic is very cute. I love how you kept Yoko snappy in the beginning, but then he thawed out and tried to comfort Ohkura when he found out what happened. And Yoko trying to cheer him up with food and hanging out, and Ohkura being a sleepyhead and refusing - I was like, lol typical Tacchon XD

And then when they were in bed together - UGH TYPICAL OHKURA of course he'd fall asleep in the middle of something like that! XD Poor Yoko, though haha. Left frustrated and awkward.

The ending is super sweet, though. ♥

Thanks again for the fic, Anon, and congrats for your first published fic. There were some spelling, grammar and punctuation mistakes here and there, but no worries; I understood the whole story. I hope you keep at writing and improving :) Thanks again.

[yukitsubute]

thanks for this anon-san, that was really a cute story. And it's so rare to read that pair these days <3

[lalois]

Well I've always kept pets and my dearest one died last march after a whole life spent together, so I really get Ohkura's feelings, which are true indeed, his dog John died last year If I remember well... :/

And of course Yoko cannot resist Ohkura making sweet eyes at him when being asked to stay!
And you made it blondie Ohkura <3 who cares if he fell asleep, apparently he had been conscious enough before <3