[Fanfic] Boston` One-shot ShouxHiroto

Jun 27, 2007 09:07


Title - Boston`
Author - K-laker
Rating - PG- 13
Warnings - Occasional swearing. Angst-attack.
Pairings - ShouxHiroto, implied ShouxNao
Disclaimers - I only own the plot and the words.

-Fanfiction Archive-

There was just something so wrong with the world. )

alice nine., shouxhiroto, k-laker, angst, crap, shouxnao, boston`

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asaxchan June 27 2007, 18:10:17 UTC
-__-

You're right, that was angsty. But it wasn't the kind of angst that makes you choke, you know? It was the right amount of angst, which I commend you for because that's hard to do. Mm... It made me sad, because I adore Pon and I don't want him to be hurt. Uhm, I really hope you end up making this into a multi-chapter thing, because I'd love to read more. :D

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k_laker June 27 2007, 18:59:54 UTC
Thanks so much!

I didn't know whether it was too much angst or not enough angst to be called an angsty fic. Ahahaha. I didn't know it was hard to do that. It kind of came to me. ;-;

I'll actually look forward to making the next chapter. :]

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asaxchan June 27 2007, 19:25:22 UTC
It takes me some effort to find the right balance of angst and... other stuff. :D But yeah, you're right, sometimes it just comes to you. That's good, lol. That happens to me occasionally, but sicne I'm the type to half-start a story and then lose my inspiration, usually it takes some work. Lmao.

Aaaand yay, I shall anxiously await it!

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k_laker June 27 2007, 19:33:43 UTC
Personally, I was in the mood to make someone get emotionally hurt like I was and still am going to be. o-o;

Oh gosh! I have many of the half-assed let's-start-a-new-story-but-it-fails stories. D: They hate me to death as they sit and rot away.

My inspiration = Music.

Woooo. Anxious reader! Yesss. x3;

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x_nightmare_x June 27 2007, 18:21:32 UTC
My alice nine. OTP + angst = WIN FOR LIFE!

You should definately make this a story ^_~

Wonderful~

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k_laker June 27 2007, 19:01:21 UTC
Forgive me. What does OTP mean? I see it thrown around a lot lately and I'm clueless. o-o;

But thanks! I think I'm far from winning at life though, as I'm resorting to moping around on the internet because someone is leaving for bootcamp today. ;-;

I'm seriously considering making it a story now. <3

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x_nightmare_x June 27 2007, 19:07:45 UTC
OTP = one true pairing :)

You're welcome!! Sorry to hear about that. I think moping around on the internet is the best thing to do :)

Please do!!

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k_laker June 27 2007, 19:37:06 UTC
Oh man. -faceplam-

Somehow, I think I should have know this. CONSPIRICY. D<
Thanks though. :]

Ahahaha. I guess the result of moping is good ne? ><;

I will!

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murd3r4lyf3 June 27 2007, 18:29:42 UTC
wow...major angst in the beginning...wow, can't wait to read more...

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k_laker June 27 2007, 19:02:50 UTC
Ahahaha. Angst = A lot of my writing for awhile.

Thanks though. -makes up a plan for future chapters!- :D

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kiwikiwikandy June 27 2007, 18:58:22 UTC
Aw. D:
You write emotions so well (almost too well >_>')!
I think this is good as a oneshot or could be made into a chapter story.
But either way, I like it. <3

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k_laker June 27 2007, 19:03:58 UTC
Why thank you. x]

I write them as they come to me. Basically, I've had a lot of these same feelings but I've never been in a relationship...interesting ne?

Chapter Story it's going to be now.

I'm glad you like it. <3

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jrock_goddess June 27 2007, 21:31:05 UTC
*Tears welling in eyes* AHHHHHHHHH Poor Hiroto... make more chapters, and maybe *puppy dog eyes* they'll get back together?

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k_laker June 27 2007, 22:34:33 UTC
Awww don't cry! That's my job! ;-;

I'll make more chapter for sure.

I dunno...he might suffer some more first...:]

(I just made another fic! Check it outtt. xD; -selfpromotion-)

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