[fic] No one Really Knows -Chapter Four- [ToraxHiroto; HirotoxTora]

Sep 23, 2008 14:05

Title: No one Really Knows
Chapter: Four
Author: k_laker 
Band/Pairing: ToraxHiroto; HirotoxTora [alice nine.]
Theme: 11. envy & 29. surprise (30emotions )
Rating: PG [possibly throughout; no promises; could rise to R; possibly]
Warnings: none.
Disclaimer: I only own the plot and the words.
Beta: kavikalphawolf  &  malveillance 
Word Count: 3394
Summary: It's just how things were.
Notes: x- ( Read more... )

no one really knows, chapter four, hirotoxtora

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k_laker September 24 2008, 03:19:06 UTC
XD!
You read this one first?

Oh well! When you read the other chapters, you'll come back to this one and prolly read it over again.

And thanks omfg. <3333

XD <33333333333

lolol that was me. XD

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mellokiss September 24 2008, 04:36:09 UTC
OH LULULULULULL. LOOK IT'S ME AGAIN.
;LKJGLDFIOGPSRIOGNS;DFNV
I STILL LOVE THIS SHIT.

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k_laker September 24 2008, 04:37:17 UTC
OMFG THAT MAKES ME HAPPY. XD;

SOME PEOPLE GET BORED WITH OLD FICS BUT LAKSDJLASKJD

CAUSE OF THIS FIC, I MET CHU. ;-;

<33333333333

dskfjsdflkshdlkshndkjrshnk jrhn;akjn <333

THANK YOU SO MUCH BB. ;-;

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take_pon September 25 2008, 19:16:01 UTC
oh!!
i'm really happy!!
waiting fot long times!!
but..yeah! you post new chapter!
PS : i love ToraxPon! cute paring!!

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k_laker September 25 2008, 20:05:24 UTC
I'm glad that you waited so long! 8D!

Thanks for reading. n_____n;;

Yeah I love them so much. <33

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anonymous September 25 2008, 23:45:38 UTC
I loved it!

MORE <3

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k_laker September 26 2008, 23:03:34 UTC
<33 Thanks for reading. :3

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bauci September 26 2008, 09:05:54 UTC
I absolutely loved this chapter. There's something distinctive in a way you're telling this, I can't put my finger on it but I like it a lot :) I think my favorite part was with the sky and sunset. Usually the sky inserts with Pon seem cliché but this fit so well that I was already on the next paragraph when I went: ....OH!

Just. The whole flow is so good. Thank you for sharing m(_ _)m
And please do continue ♥!

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k_laker September 26 2008, 23:03:18 UTC
Aww thanks so much! 8D!

Your comments are always so nice. <3 They make me warm and fuzzy. n___n;

I know I was thinking the same thing when I put it in but I wanted to make it short so it wouldn't stretch/exhaust its purpose. XD; <33

Thank you so much for reading! ~

I'll get Chapter Five out as soon as I can. 8D

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