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TORONTONIAN STORY
Dec 05, 2005 13:18
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tearslake
December 5 2005, 23:51:40 UTC
in the second chapter you wrote: "...they call `love`, but `love` nowadays is a term that can be applied anything.”"
- have you missed "to"? as in "...term that can be applied to anything."
i like the story! :o) waiting for next chapter!
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- have you missed "to"? as in "...term that can be applied to anything."
i like the story! :o) waiting for next chapter!
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