Comments | k_of_t: Torontonian Story renamed

k_of_t

Torontonian Story renamed

Dec 31, 2005 01:28

I renamed the Torontonian Story into TO Vignettes.

The first one sounds wierd. So I hope the new title is better. But I welcome criticism and feedback.

Also, because some people were projecting the fictional story plot onto some very real people I had to create a whole Frequently Asked Question section to be able to adjust all misconceptions that ( Read more... )

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bolnaia_sobaka December 31 2005, 21:22:06 UTC

I posted a link to the story on my lj, so maybe you'll be getting comments from people you don't know. Just so you're prepared.

Thanks!!! k_of_t January 4 2006, 16:37:19 UTC

Umka you're great!!! Thanks!!!

tearslake January 3 2006, 01:28:02 UTC

oh no! the whole house has been exploded with people in it!!

Explosion k_of_t January 4 2006, 16:56:50 UTC

My sister, when she looked over that chapter said that it was cold-hearted.

Was it too much?

You know I just could not resist adding some world philosophy to it. :-)

Re: Explosion tearslake January 5 2006, 04:41:10 UTC

i just found it a little unrealistic

Re: Explosion (-kostia) tearslake January 5 2006, 05:14:14 UTC

Yeah. Wayne told me that the writing was okey because it was realistic. He said that based on Chapter 4 (Wheeles of Revenge). Chapter 5 is taking a different turn. But you're right. And thank you for that obsevation, it is totally in alignment with my own worries about that chapter.

Thanks!

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