[Fic-Repost] Big Red Boat (OshiGaku/gen)

[kabajirou]

Title : Big Red Boat
Character/Pair : Oshitari/Gakuto (Hyotei)
Rating : G [gen]
Disclaimer : A non-profit fanfic venture, no copyright infringement intended. PoT belongs to Konomi Takeshi and Tachibana belongs to me (jumps him).
Notes : Another edited repost from ff.net (one can never edit enough). Wanna test out the memories function (which I don'

Comments

[morinotokei]

*has given up on fangirling quietly* Eeeee. OshiGaku! This was so cute. I really liked the dialogue here. You've captured that boyish closeness/friendliness (which I also interpreted as mild flirting, particularly on Oshitari's end) so nicely. Oshitari teasing Gakuto while spouting bad sappy phrases is priceless. I love the addition of Oshitari's movie choice. *is a details whore* I like the unspoken moments too, particularly Oshitari handing Gakuto his jacket to lay his head on, and Gakuto not thinking twice about it and using it. The imagery of the two of them looking at clouds and bantering and roughhousing it outside on a warm day is just lovely. *_*

[kabajirou]

Hee. I enjoying seeing how others view my work (or should it be my words LOL) so I thank you for telling me your impressions :)

[kabajirou]

BTW luminata forgot to thank you for pointing out the spam thing. That was really embarrassing so I had to delete those comments XD.

[one_if_by_land]

Mm, your characterization is insanely good.

"You play, you pay," the redhead insisted.

*laughs* I love that line. Your Gakuto! Your Oshitari! *refrains from fangirling but it is so hard*

[kabajirou]

Hee thanks. I enjoyed writing this fic actually. It was my first PoT one ^_^.

[orpheneritus]

Another Gakushi fan... I'm collecting ^^

I really liked the general conversation here. They had such an easy established conversation. I enjoyed the bantering. It gave a lot of flesh to their compainionship.

I dropped by while searching for theelusive Gakushi archive... which I haven't found yet. Hope you don't mind if I stop by every now and then.

[orpheneritus]

Well I never found that elusive Gakushi archive, so I've decided to create one.

I am currently working on a website dedicated to fiction about Mukahi Gakuto and Oshitari Yuushi. I am writing to ask if you are interested in having the above story included on love complicated...

You can currently view the site at its temporary home: http://earth.prohosting.com/gakushi/

Many thanks for your time,

orpheneritus

orpheneritus @ pacific.net.au