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kachelofen

THE SIGN, PART 8 / 8

Mar 30, 2012 23:52

( PART EIGHT )

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missbecks1022 March 31 2012, 01:40:34 UTC

I had no idea I was capable of holding my breath for as long as I did....I could NOT physically breathe until the last few sentences. Geez, I started crying when the whole Ted section was happening! And I just kept on crying....very hard to do when you are holding your breath! LOL

Fascinating and amazing....this story has been a joy to read!

kachelofen March 31 2012, 19:48:15 UTC

Lol. I'm surprised to didn't pass out halfway through from holding your breath so long. It wasn't exactly a short chapter.

Thank you.

itzy68 March 31 2012, 01:41:51 UTC

I was so worried ever since I read your last chapter. I kept thinking that Brian was going to kill himself, and then I tried to convince myself that you would not write a death fic that would be to cruel. And I'm so glad that you didn't :D
Amazing angsty story, looking forward to the epilogue :D

kachelofen March 31 2012, 19:49:46 UTC

Even I wouldn't write a major character death without a death!fic warning. :-D

Thank you.

itzy68 March 31 2012, 20:10:20 UTC

I know, that's what I kept telling myself ;)

rulisteningbj March 31 2012, 02:02:31 UTC

OMG! My heart was beating so fast through the whole chapter. I was holding my breath and thinking, she will not do this to us. Thank you! I enjoyed Brian's reasoning to himself as he smoked along side the road. Well written, as always I hate when one of your stories comes to an end. But I have the epilogue to look foward to.

Dee Dee

kachelofen March 31 2012, 19:51:45 UTC

Lol. I suppose after springing Gus on you, anything seemed possible. :-D

Thank you, Dee Dee.

moonbrightnites March 31 2012, 02:20:16 UTC

I was tense and anxious through this whole chapter and that's pretty impressive considering that I absolutely knew you would never kill Brian. That takes an amazing amount of skill to pull off. ♥

kachelofen March 31 2012, 20:03:28 UTC

That's quite a compliment. Thank you. ♥

later2nite March 31 2012, 02:54:23 UTC

Thank you for making Brian come to his senses. I read this story with a lingering feeling of sadness all the way though, trying to prepare myself for a devastating ending. But the end was wonderful. Thank you for that.

kachelofen March 31 2012, 20:06:17 UTC

There is an underlying sadness throughout, which is no wonder after what happened. But in the end there's some hope after all. :-)

Thank you.