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pet0511 December 7 2012, 12:32:12 UTC
Wow.
Just wow.
Thank you for that!
Pet

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kachelofen December 7 2012, 17:51:10 UTC
Thank you for this - and the rest of it.

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lazy_8s December 7 2012, 13:06:52 UTC

Well, this has been building for awhile, even if a certain fiddler wasn't involved. LOL I can't wait to see the aftermath, as well as how Brian's relationships with Michael and Lindsay continue to evolve. Great chapter!

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kachelofen December 7 2012, 17:53:08 UTC
And aren't we all glad that Ethan is nowhere in sight? Lol.

Thank you.

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kachelofen December 7 2012, 17:54:31 UTC
Hopefully the wake-up call will actually wake him up. :-)

Thank you.

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love4movies December 7 2012, 14:21:59 UTC
Ah, one of my favorite scenes! Well done. I'm in a hurry, so no longer comment this time.

(But saw a small typo: 'When he tries to take my clothes off' - drittletztes Kapitel)

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kachelofen December 7 2012, 17:57:00 UTC
Thanks for pointing that out. Would you believe that I re-read the last few paragraphs about a hundred times because I changed one sentence at the last minute? Lol.

Thank you for commenting, too. :-)

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mulderbuz December 7 2012, 15:32:03 UTC
Now I want to go to the other side, in Justin's mind.

"Yes, we were. But it’s not what it looks like."

What did he mind by this?

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kachelofen December 7 2012, 18:08:46 UTC
Hopefully it will become clearer in the next chapter. But I think Brian already got it judging by his reaction.

Thank you.

Hugs.

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