I CAN SEE CLEARLY NOW, PART 8 / 12

[kachelofen]

Comments

[toto_too514]

AHHHHHHHH!

[kachelofen]

Lol. Thank you.

[duffy_60]

Oh, I did NOT see that coming!!
You did good, sweetie. I think you surprised us all! The cancer arc wasn't even on my radar screen, but now it all makes sense. Justin through Brian off the cliff this time.

WELL DONE!

:-)

[kachelofen]

Good. I wouldn't like to be predictable. *g*

Thank you, Daphne. ♥

[duffy_60]

Of course, I meant threw -- not through. Geesh, color me embarrassed. I deal with the English language every day for my job. *blushes*

[kachelofen]

You should see the mistakes I pick out even while I'm posting, after I read it about a hundred times. :-)

[koalared]

I'm reading along absolutely loathing Brian. What a dick, what an ass (I'm not praising his physical attributes either!lol) what an ignoramus! I should have seen it, you're hitting all the canon stuff, but I didn't. I was as blindsided as Brian!
Justin!

[kachelofen]

Yes, everything's in there. In the end there will be a bombing and everybody dies. Just kidding. I think. *g*

Thank you.

[love4movies]

Love. You. So. Hard.

Perfect, just perfect, for this angst-loving reader.

Wow.

[kachelofen]

Enough angst for you? Or are we going with Brian's 'never enough'? :-D

Thank you.

[lazy_8s]

And, there it is, the proverbial fist of angst that you always insert into your fics. That's why I love your writing! 'nods' First, although Brian is listing all the ways that he has fucked up, I cannot help but sympathize with him, a messed up man-child who has to walk away from the only secure relationship that he has probably ever known. And, then he's told that Justin has cancer. What will he do? Damn, I cannot wait for the next update.

I adore this fic so much! :)

[kachelofen]

You've gotta feel a little sorry for Brian, despite all his failings, don't you?

And yes, there really wasn't enough angst in this fic. I'm glad you agree. :-D

Thank you.