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lanbeo December 17 2012, 15:51:50 UTC
YES!!!! Yes yes yes!!!! Finally, Brian grows a pair and confess his true feeling. They're honest with each other, another good thing~

“More? Okay, how about this? I love you. I’m in love with you. I want you. I want to be with you. You’re beautiful. You’re smart. You’re funny. You light up the room. You light up my life. My life is not worth living without you. You’re the one. You complete me. Oh, for fuck’s sake, Justin, feel free to stop me before I grow a twat.” <== I couldn't find another way for Brian to say I love you that is more Brian than THIS. LMAO.

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kachelofen December 18 2012, 12:53:26 UTC
Ah well, he had to get there eventually. I'm glad you thought it was reasonably in character, although Brian himself didn't seem to think so. :-D

Thank you.

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flequillitos December 17 2012, 16:59:14 UTC

I was waiting for the last chapter to do a huge review but I just can't help myself, I love this, it's just perfect! I don't know how you do it but you write Brian/Justin perfect, even with the age's twist I can't thing in a single thing I would change, nothing, nothing

and it's really a surprise because I have read a lot of real Justins but not Brians, he is so complicated that a lot of writers don't get him and definitely you do, I always thought that if Brian were younger he will be more "willing" to have a relationship because he didn't have 10 years to build new walls

congratulations, you always get me hooked since the first chapter ;)

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kachelofen December 18 2012, 12:56:21 UTC
Thank you. I'm flattered. Brian is very complicated and I dare say we all see him a little differently. But I'm glad you agree with my take on him. He's definitely a lot of fun to write. :-)

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koalared December 17 2012, 17:24:17 UTC
All during the first 2/3 of this chapter I'm like
"OMG if those 2 would JUST TALK!" And they finally did.
=D I liked this chapter.

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kachelofen December 18 2012, 12:57:40 UTC
Lol. Did you shout at the screen? I sometimes do.

Thank you.

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love4movies December 17 2012, 17:26:25 UTC
Yes! Finally they start talking.

Great chapter. As always!

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kachelofen December 18 2012, 12:58:08 UTC
Yep. They did.

Thank you.

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petulant2u December 17 2012, 18:08:37 UTC
You had me scared there for a minute! I thought at first, 'geesh these two are never on the same page!' But then they connected! Like pieces in a puzzle. Loved it!

I'm so sad there is only one more chapter! :-(
This story was so heartbreakingly beautiful! It had my emotions all over the place!

What can I say? I'm a sucker for your stories! :-)

Gina

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kachelofen December 18 2012, 13:00:21 UTC
Yes, only one more chapter and it's rather short, too. Sorry about that. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though.

Thanks, Gina.

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