I CAN SEE CLEARLY NOW, PART 11 / 12

[kachelofen]

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[itzy68]

WOW! That was perfect in so many ways. I'm so happy right NOW :D

[kachelofen]

Thank you. Happiness is good. :-)

[armandyouidiot]

This chapter had me on the edge of my seat, worried they were going to fuck it up spectacularly. What a relief when they finally talked it out! I particularly liked how Justin was sure Brian must be disgusted with him and Brian hadn't even registered it. Loved “Pieces slotting into place" <3

[kachelofen]

Ah well, I'm sure they'll find a way to fuck it up somehow in the future. :-)

Thank you ♥

[bksbracelet]

Oh that was wonderful I had this nagging feeling all through that Brian was going to pull back and walk away again. At last Brian steps up :)

[kachelofen]

Yep, he did. And about time, too.

Thank you, Chris.

[lrknow]

This chapter is love!!!!!!!!
You painted a realistic picture with Justin's condition due to his treatment and body image issues.Honestly I was a little afraid in the beginning and ready to scream at them to get their heads out of their asses..they did AND HOW!!! I just love how mature they are and how comfortable they are at this point, in short, I freaking love this chapter...

That being said, I can't believe there's only one chapter left am so gonna miss this story :(
*Hugs you*
Kimi

[kachelofen]

I take it, you liked this chapter then? Lol. It is maybe a little schmoopy, but Brian is trying desperately to get it right, so here we are. :-)

Thank you, Kimi. Hugs.

[95baker]

I could kiss you right now. I read the whole chapter, probably 4 times now, on the edge of my seat. Wondering could they get it right, could they trust the other and themselves enough. And there were times that I thought on no, here we go and they did go, but this time together.

I love that each pushed the other, challenges them and this time they were willing to take a chance on love and risk a little of themselves. Especially Brian once he figured out that he really had nothing to lose.

It was perfect as is your writing. I enjoyed every minute more than once. Is it really coming to an end? There is something about your writing that draws you in plus you get these two even in an invented AU. I have enjoyed the ride as always.

Hugs,
Kate

[kachelofen]

Brian is mostly willfully ignoring things, not too stupid to see them. He can act when the situation demands it. :-)

I thought you might enjoy this chapter, you big romantic, you.

Thank you, Kate. Love your comments, as you well know.
Hugs,
Betty