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rulisteningbj May 31 2013, 02:14:04 UTC
Oh girl, welcome back. Have missed you. But what a lovely present to open and read this evening. Very interesting, I am hooked. Looking forward to the weekend.

Dee Dee

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kachelofen May 31 2013, 11:14:31 UTC
Hi Dee Dee. I've been AWOL for a bit, but I hope this makes up for it. Thank you.

Betty

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armandyouidiot May 31 2013, 02:36:23 UTC
Always a delight to read something of yours! What an interesting point of view, like he's telling Justin. I enjoyed the way Justin cleared up the difference between an ultimatum and an offer, Rowrr!

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kachelofen May 31 2013, 11:17:01 UTC
I was trying out this new style and it was fun to write. I'm hoping it doesn't distract too much from the story. Thank you for your comment.

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cheburashka_2 May 31 2013, 04:50:14 UTC
Loved the first chapter very much! Can't wait for the next one.

Cheers,
Vin

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kachelofen May 31 2013, 11:20:07 UTC
Thank you for letting me know. It's nice to hear from you.
Betty

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6frog May 31 2013, 05:19:18 UTC
What a wonderful surprise, I so love your stories. I see I'm not the only one looking forward to the next chapter. I guess that for every comment at least a hundred people are silently enjoying, to my shame I seldom comment as I can't spend long at my desk so I copy them to my laptop and read in bed but I am one of your most ardent admirers.

Lots of thanks and love from 6frog

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kachelofen May 31 2013, 11:25:33 UTC
I can't really complain because a) I hardly ever comment on anything and b) the comments I do get are incredibly nice. I think commenting in general is on the decline. We need a 'like' button on LJ.

Thank you for taking the time to let me know that you liked this. I'm very flattered by your comment. I hope you enjoy the other chapters as well and that they'll entertain you while you're not able to be active much.

Best wishes to you.
Love,
Betty

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pet0511 May 31 2013, 14:21:39 UTC
I'm "in a mood" today but I have to say it anyway: I learned that for whatever reason some readers "can't' say more than "Thanks - I like it". At least they are still using words. If we ever come to the point here to only use "like" or "kudos" buttons, it will be the end of what I love of the world of online fiction. I get that not every reader wants to comment or is able to etc but if they want/can, they just need the outlet and a button to press is not satisfying.
Just saying, and now I'm quiet and nice.

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kachelofen May 31 2013, 17:06:46 UTC
Don't get me wrong. I do love comments and the discussions and I would miss it terribly, if they weren't there anymore. What I meant was that it would be good to have a 'like' button as well. Not everyone has the time, inclination or confidence to leave a comment. At least it would give the author an idea of how the story is received. So I didn't mean it as an 'either/or' but as an 'as well'. :-)

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toto_too514 May 31 2013, 06:44:15 UTC
SO excited whenever I see a new story from you... and this one is so wonderfully different. I just love Brian's play-by-play of the action, and the peek into his thought process.

Can't wait for more! =]

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kachelofen May 31 2013, 11:28:06 UTC
It is a little different in style (although not much in content yet, I dare say). I'm glad you like it because I had my doubts about it. Although I did enjoy writing it.

Thank you.

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