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rulisteningbj June 5 2013, 21:47:25 UTC
I am feeling pretty dumb if you think I should be able to figure this out already. I say it is due to your fantastic writing. Wow, I can't wait for more. This onion's layers are peeling off to slowly. Ha!

Dee Dee

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kachelofen June 5 2013, 22:03:51 UTC
You're not dumb at all, my friend. I do remember going over this after I finished and tweaking some sentences to make them more obscure. I'm evil like that. It definitely seems like it's only obvious to me. And I'm cheating because I've read the later chapters already. :-)

Thank you, Dee Dee.

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armandyouidiot June 5 2013, 22:45:25 UTC
So intriguing! I love being immersed in this world, knowing I am never going to figure out what Justin is up to but still trying to puzzle it out!

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kachelofen June 6 2013, 08:28:50 UTC
I'm glad you enjoy being puzzled. :-)

Thank you.

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jg1225 June 5 2013, 23:47:23 UTC
I haven't figured it out either, but I'm sure enjoying the journey! I thought when they ran into Justin's Dad there might be some clue that they don't have the same last name...but nope!

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kachelofen June 6 2013, 08:29:49 UTC
Ah, why do think Justin looked so panicked? ;-)

Thank you.

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ta_wanda June 5 2013, 23:53:46 UTC
I am really enjoying this story. I love the twists you've put on canon elements and the mystery aspect. Daphne is a rock, as always. She's a good friend to Justin. I don't know how you're going to wean Ethan, but I agree with Daphne about s him.

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kachelofen June 6 2013, 08:30:56 UTC
Daphne is always fun to write. She was one of my favourite characters on the show.

Thank you.

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koalared June 6 2013, 01:09:37 UTC
Just started reading this yesterday. It's fantastic.
I have a sketchy theory about what's going on. Probably totally
off but the journey is great.

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kachelofen June 6 2013, 08:33:06 UTC
You never know, you may be spot on. :-)

Thank you. I'm glad you joined us.

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