PARTNERS IN CRIME, PART 10 / 10 + EPILOGUE

[kachelofen]

Comments

[sjmpets]

Reading this last chapter I thought, Robin Hood, the tv show Leverage. Ha! Excellent story. Knew Brian could use a change in occupations.

[kachelofen]

The ending has a lot of Leverage in it, hasn't it? I think Brian would be perfect as Nate.

Thank you so much for commenting throughout.:-)

[pet0511]

I had a lot of fun reading the story, and parts of the last chapter and parts of the epi are my fav. I liked how you portrayed Brian and Michael when he said good bye to Michael. I think the friendship to Michael is a big part of why Brian holds on Pittsburgh - everything Michael stands for, a nest, love, reliability. It was important for me to accept and appreciate Brian's leaving. The same for Lindsay, only not in the same depth - here it's about the mix of Lindsay and Gus. Very well done

[kachelofen]

First up: if you had fun, all is well. No point reading if you don't

[petulant2u]

I just caught up with this story two nights ago. At first, I was wary, because it's a departure from your usual writing, and writing style. (took me a while to get use to the POV change up)
However, once again, your superb story telling skills, as well as writing skills, pulled me in!

For me it had all the elements I expect from your stories, though told a bit differently than what I'm used to from you. It was intriguing, heartbreaking, suspenseful and exhilarating! And, of course, you gave me this GREAT story book ending! LOVED LOVED LOVED it!

Again, thank you for sharing with us another wonderful story! No one, imo, writes our boys emotional connection with one another better than you. All of it. The angst, the love... and everything in between.

Gina

[kachelofen]

Hello, Gina, it's good to hear from you.

This story was quite a departure for me in style and contents. It was fun to write and trying out a different POV. I know it takes a bit of getting used to, especially with two different narrators. So thank you for reading and complimenting the story. I am very flattered that you think so highly of my writing.

Take care.
Hugs,
Betty

[chelsea193]

Terrific! A thoroughly enjoyable read.

[kachelofen]

Thank you. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it.

[zazuburgh]

No.

[kachelofen]

Quite frankly, my dear, I don't know what to do with this.