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Doctor Who Fic: Optimistic 1/1

Jan 22, 2010 19:36

Title: Optimistic 1/1
Author: Unknown Kadath, aka kadath_or_bust
Series: The Other Egg of the Phoenix (but can be read independently)
Beta: Tempusdominus10
Rating: K
Word Count: 3,239
Characters: 10th Doctor, Alternate 10th Doctor, Rose Tyler
Genre: Drama
Summary: Two people have just been ditched on a beach in Norway. 10.5's pov.
Disclaimer: Nope. Not ( Read more... )

bluesuit, fanfiction, other egg of the phoenix, rose, tenth doctor

Comments 15

mornea January 23 2010, 01:57:35 UTC

Very nice... I like how you clearly show he's still him, even with another him running around. I puzzled over 10.5 for quite awhile, trying to figure out what exactly RTD was doing/saying with this. You make sense of it all. Loved the reference back to Genesis of the Daleks, too.

kadath_or_bust January 23 2010, 02:56:09 UTC

Yeah, I had trouble figuring out what to do with him, too--and I'm still working on it. Glad to hear it's working out.

amberfocus January 23 2010, 02:17:24 UTC

That's beautiful and sad and so well done. I like that it ends on a hopeful note.

kadath_or_bust January 23 2010, 02:43:34 UTC

Thanks--the next story in this series is going to be angsty as well, but after that I'm hoping it'll be more upbeat.

sunnytyler001 January 23 2010, 09:25:19 UTC

Yay! Lovely ending!

kadath_or_bust January 23 2010, 12:58:55 UTC

Thank you. I love happy endings. (Or at least, hopeful endings.)

tegdoh January 23 2010, 17:03:53 UTC

That was lovely! I just watched Journey's End last night for the first time, and you've done a wonderful job capturing many of own my thoughts about the ending. I don't think it would be easy for either Rose or 10.5 to move on past all of that grief and betrayal. But I hope that they would.

Might I friend you?

tegdoh January 23 2010, 17:04:31 UTC

And meant to add, I'm looking forward to seeing where you go with the series!

kadath_or_bust January 23 2010, 17:27:56 UTC

Thank you, yes you may friend me (yippee!) and I'm always glad to hear that people are interested in a continuation. I intend to go far, and, eventually, in strange directions.

asahifirsa February 13 2010, 23:22:57 UTC

I think it's quite difficult to write a story from that Doctor's POV, but you did really well here. I also like that Rose is the strong one in this, the one who gets a grip first. I'm looking forward to the continuation in that 'verse.

kadath_or_bust February 14 2010, 00:07:13 UTC

Thank you. I'm working on more stories now, glad to hear you like it so far.