LOLZ! i know what you mean- you tell the story, not make it :P very happy there will be a sequel! just one request: keep it teen please! i DO NOT EVER read anything explicit or adult. i read stuff where it's like 'and den they did sex!' but if it describes the act in detail i refuse no matter how much i like the rest of the story. it's not personal... if the story tells you to write smut, i won't be angry, i just won't read it :)
sorry if thats a downer! does it help to know i'd really really WANT to read it! cuz u know i love you already... heh heh XD
I have no current plans to write anything explicit in terms of sex, though I've got a Time War story in the works that's got some swearing and violence. Thank you for reading!
Well, since that was my major goal in this story ... I now feel validated as a writer. Thank you, with hugs. (And I cried the whole time I was writing that, too.)
So brilliant the way you used the Phoenix metaphor. This was my favorite line, I think: He’d given her part of his body, so that she could go on holding his hand, a universe away. Only in Dr. Who would that be so awesome. I cried during the meta-farewell, but the ending was just lovely.
I agree with the first commenter. I'd love to read a sequel where they figure out work and play and love, and as long as we see the tender emotions beforehand, I won't miss reading about the moment itself.
Yeah, I suppose outside the Whoniverse that would be a bit icky ... lol.
Not entirely sure where the series will end up going rating-wise, but there will be more than one sequel (presuming I'm not struck by a bus or meteor or some such thing) and the next story takes place in a single day and will be rated T. The premise is, "Just how much trouble can one man get into in twenty-four hours?"
And she realized she did love him, after all. Loved him no matter how much or how little of him was left, loved him even if he left her a thousand times, loved him even if he’d never loved her. She always had, always would, every part of him. If he was chopped into a million bits, she would love every one, and if he were burned to ash and scattered on the wind then she would love the wind.
This gave me chills! Excellent imagery, just gorgeous angst and descriptions.
It was a slightly fussy-looking bed, white-painted wood and white quilt patterned with pink roses, a matching fabric panel on the headboard with an incongruous blaster-hole scorched through it. Well, that ought to make a doctor feel at home, anyway
ROFLMAO!!!! I disrupted training class when I read this - oops, my bad! HA!
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sorry if thats a downer! does it help to know i'd really really WANT to read it! cuz u know i love you already... heh heh XD
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I agree with the first commenter. I'd love to read a sequel where they figure out work and play and love, and as long as we see the tender emotions beforehand, I won't miss reading about the moment itself.
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Not entirely sure where the series will end up going rating-wise, but there will be more than one sequel (presuming I'm not struck by a bus or meteor or some such thing) and the next story takes place in a single day and will be rated T. The premise is, "Just how much trouble can one man get into in twenty-four hours?"
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This gave me chills! Excellent imagery, just gorgeous angst and descriptions.
It was a slightly fussy-looking bed, white-painted wood and white quilt patterned with pink roses, a matching fabric panel on the headboard with an incongruous blaster-hole scorched through it. Well, that ought to make a doctor feel at home, anyway
ROFLMAO!!!! I disrupted training class when I read this - oops, my bad! HA!
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