Hawaii Five-0 Drabbles!

[kae_kae]

1 Hindi Sad Diamonds - Moulin Rouge

“You’re gonna make a lotta money here,” one girl promised Kono.  “It’s not so bad.”

Kono remembered to play her part with a sad nod as she sat down and scanned her surroundings.  Zion shimmered, surprisingly classy for what it was, and the girls looked well taken care of despite the fact that they were

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[kae_kae]

Thanks! I really like the last one too. :)

[mystizan]

How much do I love ur icon? Very!

[indigocat]

That was sweet. Super hero one was my favorite.

[kae_kae]

Thanks! I'm glad you liked them.

[kae_kae]

Thanks! That one was totally supposed to just be silly, and then I don't know... Glad you liked them.

[mystizan]

1. Rolling in the Deep is addictive....love it

2. These were so simple, or started out that way, but so often ended by sucker-punching me. For example:

“You do this on purpose, don’t you?” Simple enuf yea? & then Better that Danny beat up on Steve for messing with his stuff than beating up on himself for being too late to protect a girl only a few years older than his own. Bam! Straight to my gut.

“Here’s to having pineapple instead of corned beef to eat tonight.” Chin, Kono, and Steve clinked glasses. Danny pinched the bridge of his nose before flagging down the waitress for more beer. Bad Steve, BAD! lol

Grace tells Dad this one weekend, and his face pinches at the corners. “If he’s a superhero, what does that make me, the sidekick?”

Grace shakes her head. “You’re Danno, that’s better,” she answers before her Danno picks her up into a bear hug. Ohhh Gracie....THIS is y we love u!

[kae_kae]

Thanks for all the feedback! None of them STARTED with the sucker punch endings, but most of them seemed to end that way, huh? Thanks for reading.

[mystizan]

Nnnnnnnnnope! But I liked it that way :) ur most welcome.

[quoththewriter]

All of these are fantastic, very powerful little pieces in so few words. I love love love that one with the radio and Steve playing with the channels to distract Danny from the case, that seems like something he would do.

And Grace, because anything with Grace is completely adorable.

[kae_kae]

Thanks! I'm glad my first jump into H50 fic seemed to work. :)