Worlds Apart 49

Mar 06, 2012 10:00


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kaelaaw April 7 2012, 04:28:38 UTC
sorry it wasn't longer and for the wait of both this one and the next one. Hopefully things will improve. Thank You I don't intend to stop the good work.

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fran_fic March 8 2012, 03:25:43 UTC
It's sad to read the flashback, but I liked it! I read that theme in another story too, breaking someone by having someone pretend to care about them, only to later reveal it was all a lie... It's extremely cruel, and very effective. Poor Gorlyn. No wonder it would be hard for him to trust anyone. Deep inside he must wonder if Neisk is maybe doing the same thing now?

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kaelaaw April 7 2012, 04:26:31 UTC
Yeah I've ready that theme a few times and I always thought it was the worst. Yes he really does have trust issues. I think deep inside he will always wonder that even when it becomes an irrational.

sorry I'm slow on responding I've been low on energy this month.

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sa_tsl March 9 2012, 07:18:58 UTC
awww, poor gorlyn! a look at his past shows why he thinks the way he does...

thank you for writing! This chapter really moved me.

*hugs and cookies*

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kaelaaw April 7 2012, 04:23:32 UTC
I know poor guy I'm starting to get tired of picking on him. It really does reflect on why he thinks the way he does.

awww I'm so glad it moved you :)

*loves both* sorry I'm late to respond.

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