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kagekamay

Pieces of Her, 10/?

Mar 01, 2011 16:50

TItle: Pieces of Her, 10/?
Author: Kagekamay
Rating: R
Length: 3,514
Spoilers: AU after Special Education
Summary: Contrary to popular belief, Rachel Berry wasn't unbreakable. Now she's broken and the only person who can put her back together is Quinn Fabray. WARNING deals with self harm

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Comments 19

ext_252930 March 1 2011, 23:53:32 UTC

this is so incredibly heart breaking but addicting. You've got some definite talent at writing angst!! Keep it up...b/c i check for updates like, at least 5 times a day :)

kagekamay March 2 2011, 00:40:22 UTC

thank you! I wasn't sure I could pull off at first since this is my first time trying it :) And I will update asap

bsfan March 2 2011, 00:11:43 UTC

This is really good. I started reading it a few days ago and love where it's gone. As much as I love Santana, I kind of wish Quinn had gotten that slap in. Can't wait for the next update.

kagekamay March 2 2011, 00:43:04 UTC

Thanks for reading! And yeah Santana was being unnecessarily mean :(

ayden07 March 2 2011, 00:15:33 UTC

ok im crying right now. 8`( Poor Rachel, but Quinn will stay with her!! Right??? im hoping for the best here. this is such a compelling story. you have wonderful writing talent.

kagekamay March 2 2011, 00:44:52 UTC

Thank you *blushes* sometimes I'm not sure about my writing hehe. I'm sorry the chapter made you cry :( but I promise Quinn's not going anywhere.

skyline33 March 2 2011, 00:34:18 UTC

Nice job :DD you get the angst just right and its not too much to the point where you depress the reader... Hope whoever helps you gets credit :ppp

kagekamay March 2 2011, 00:38:59 UTC

funnyyy bunso :) and thank you *hands box of pocky*

skyline33 March 2 2011, 01:15:53 UTC

im not ur bunso >3> but ill take the pocky XDD ~grabs the pocky and eats half of it~ here u take the over half cuz im just nice like that :)

kagekamay March 2 2011, 02:13:09 UTC

*eats pocky then snatches box back* thank yuuu *runs away laughing*

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miss_darkmoon March 2 2011, 00:39:04 UTC

Oh my gosh, wow... yeah, compelling is a great word for this story. I am blown away. The plot with Santana and Sam worked so well, and Rachel is just... heartbreaking. I'm so glad Quinn is staying with her. Like... holy freaking crap. And the image of her just sitting there in the stall... wow. Fantastic.

I can't wait for the next update!!

kagekamay March 2 2011, 00:56:28 UTC

Thanks for commenting! And yes, it's a good thing Quinn's with her right now otherwise Rachel would probably be a lot worse :(