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Pieces of Her, 11/?

Mar 11, 2011 11:11

Title: Pieces of Her, 11/?
Author: Kagekamay
Rating: R
Length: 2,113
Spoilers: AU after Special Education
Summary: Contrary to popular belief, Rachel Berry wasn't unbreakable. Now she's broken and the only person who can put her back together is Quinn Fabray. WARNING deals with self harm

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faberry, pieces of her

Comments 18

ext_252930 March 11 2011, 22:58:50 UTC

Finally an update!!!! OMG MORE MORE MORE MORE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!! thank you

kagekamay March 12 2011, 00:03:57 UTC

I'm SO SORRY I haven't updated in forever! It's been crazy :( but rest assured, I will be working on the next chapter this weekend.

ermsu March 12 2011, 00:42:07 UTC

ok so i've been following this and not saying anything but i can't anymore. this is so amazingly well written and so believable. I cannot wait for the next part. It makes so much sense (seriously do not know how the rachel being bullied story line has never come up on the show. they crap all over her never mentioning it, but make kurt's storyline a massive deal) but you write her complete breakdown so well. love the way you've written quinn too with her emotional turmoil too. just well done. keep it coming :)

kagekamay March 12 2011, 01:47:59 UTC

Thanks for commenting! I love it when silent readers take the time to comment :) I'm glad it's believable I swear I go through twenty different scenarios before I stick with one :) I do wish the writers treated Rachel better instead of focusing on just sticking her with Finn :/ Faberry friendship needs to happen.

ermsu March 12 2011, 02:51:49 UTC

lol well the fic has now reduced me to tears about a hundred times from it's sadness so i thought i should probably pipe up. it shows that you've thought it through though because it's a proper character development you're showing, not just random shifts in people's personalities/beliefs.

also, this! they implied they'd make a faberry friendship when rachel was nice to quinn about the pregnancy (well done for using this in an earlier post. consistency is always welcome.) the finchel thing is old now. rachel sucks when she's in a relationship. i miss crazy/scary rachel. bring her back :)

kagekamay March 12 2011, 19:04:13 UTC

Yay!! Faberry friendship is on!!! You seriously made my day :) I was kinda hoping for some sign of it in "sexy" but then fuinn swooped in and made me sad...the brittana was epic though I was crying for pretty much the whole week. As for crazy Rachel, I will try my best to bring her back.

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skyline33 March 12 2011, 01:13:36 UTC

niceeeee focus on ur SAT though :p then you can write XDDD

kagekamay March 12 2011, 01:48:37 UTC

ehhh Faberry is more important ;) jk I've already studied...sorta...

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kagekamay March 12 2011, 19:05:05 UTC

Thank you!