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Pieces of Her, 23/?

Jul 12, 2011 18:07

Title: Pieces of Her, 23/?
Author: Kagekamay
Rating: R
Length: 3,433
Spoilers: AU after Special Education
Summary: Contrary to popular belief, Rachel Berry wasn't unbreakable. Now she's broken and the only person who can put her back together is Quinn Fabray. WARNING deals with self harm.

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Comments 8

Sadness X 1,000,000 nightcuddler July 12 2011, 22:43:19 UTC

Honestly this is by far the hardest story I have ever read. Full of so much pain and agony, all stemming from the actions of Rachel's EXTREEM self destruction because this is all it is. Despite the heart break I feel as I read this I continue to do so unable to stop myself. I realize now that I continue because I want Rachel to be okay and I know that she never will be unless Quinn can get through into Rachel's mind and take away her pain. It's been so close and yet you manage to pull the two apart time after time. 23 chapters of this. Total and very harsh angst, when will it get better , if not than please put Rachel out of her misery, death would end it all for her and for us reading this.

Re: Sadness X 1,000,000 kagekamay July 12 2011, 23:53:11 UTC

This comment may or may not have made me start writing the next chapter immediately. I PROMISE you that this is as bad as it is going to get here on out, and Quinn is going to get her ass in gear. *hugs* please don't give up!

Re: Sadness X 1,000,000 nightcuddler July 13 2011, 14:53:00 UTC

Hugs back

ashdo July 12 2011, 23:10:26 UTC

I really want Quinn to confront Rachel about her feelings. I want them to be together so badly. The "slut" written on her arm was very... angsty and intense.
can't wait for more

ayden07 July 12 2011, 23:20:48 UTC

Its killing me...its killing me to see how Rachel thinks of herself. What really has me on edge is that there are people who are in this same position and maybe they dont have anyone to talk to or to be there for them. no one deserves to feel the way Rachel does. no one deserves to be alone...
my heart breaks for Quinn. she was trying so hard to help Rachel and then it all blows up and you dont know what to do anymore. me, i would search as far and wide as it took to find Rachel and do anything, anything it took to make her see that everything she believes about herself isnt true. Quinn needs to get Rachel help, before its too late...

kagekamay July 13 2011, 00:49:55 UTC

Quinn isn't giving up, but right now she's just feeling so disheartened because Rachel keeps pulling away from her no matter what she does. It's going to take Quinn eventually taking that step and chasing after her for Rachel to finally accept that she isn't worthless.

skyline33 July 13 2011, 02:56:40 UTC

~is on the verge of tears~ dammmmnn u superstar damnnn u... why must you have rachel be like this? huh?? waaaaiiii??? yes i know it must be personal victory for you to see me like this... but .(

miss_darkmoon July 13 2011, 20:14:37 UTC

Ahhh!!!! Omg bbs!!! I feel so bad for all of them!! Ahh!!! Can't wait to read more of this!!