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[kahlias]

Pairing: Hatano Takumi / Tachibana Ayumi

Comments

[inung_sense]

kyaaaaaaa~~~ thank you so much!!! XD *hug

i love it!!!
so, they live together, ne? ><
but, the relationship is...? not as a couple? because Tachibana sensei was looking for apartment?

part 2? part 3? I'm waiting... ;)

aaah~~~ I can imagine the situation in the hospital... Takagi sensei and Ogiwara sensei! XD

[kahlias]

You do? Thank you..
I have plan to make the progress of their relationship when they live together, but I'm not sure for to make the other part or just hanging like that

[inung_sense]

I see...

thanks for the reply.

and keep writing, ne... XD

[masaki82]

Hey, just read your fanfic :)

It's good, a few errors but that's not major... the plot, you can definitely can build up with a multi-chapter series :)

I don't know what else to say but the characters are just like themselves in the drama ^^

If you want any other advice, just ask ^^ Although I'm not a writer :)

[kahlias]

I'm not sure for to make the other part or just hanging like that
Right now, I'm stuck because I really want the characters are just like themselves, not OC
Thanks