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kahn May 13 2012, 18:42:19 UTC
Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-D I'm a sucker for team-as-family so this is the natural evolution of that thought, for me.

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sequel? blackkitsune1 November 16 2012, 01:28:54 UTC
Make a sequel, with maybe the x-men please?
(of course kitty, kurt ,bobby, etc. would be deaged to stay the same age as peter or pretty close to it)

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scrollgirl May 12 2012, 01:19:45 UTC
This was so adorable! Love the take on Peter speaking sign language and being a little spider-monkey. I really like Steve and Tony having to run after Peter whenever he decides to fight crime and the team mocking via texts. :D And of course I love Steve pining for Tony, and Tony being in love right back. N'aww.

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kahn May 13 2012, 18:55:35 UTC
Peter learned the sign language from his chimpanzee chums in the laboratory. :-D That didn't make it into the story, but that's how it happened in my head. I feel raising a little superhero would involve a lot of running and explaining things to the local authorities (unless it was a little Robin which Peter is decisively not). Also, I love the team as family, so Peter's going to have a lot of weird (and deadly) Aunts and Uncles. Also, I have a weakness for pining!Steve. :-D

Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :-D

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ladyknightanka May 12 2012, 19:56:17 UTC
This is the most adorable thing. I love little Peter and Steve and Tony's interaction with him. Their evident affection is so sweet and felt really natural. Their anxiety was build up really well; Tony not wanting to become his father broke my heart a bit. BASICALLY, I LOVE THIS. ♥

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kahn May 13 2012, 19:15:28 UTC
I'm glad it felt natural! Sometimes, even though I write mostly fluff, I feel like I'm not all that good at keeping their emotions consistent. ^_^;; My headcannon is that the reason Tony very decisively doesn't have any children is that he thinks he wouldn't make a very good father, and would never want to inflict his own childhood on anyone else.

YAY! I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reading and commenting!

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sabermonk May 20 2012, 18:35:28 UTC
This was awesome! And really hilarious. I loved it. Yay!

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kahn May 22 2012, 02:36:03 UTC
:-D WELL HELLO THERE! Thank you! Did you find your way into the Avengers fandom?

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sabermonk May 24 2012, 01:19:45 UTC
Hi! I did! And now I'm going to go watch Captain America, cuz I haven't seen that one yet. ^_^

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kahn June 15 2012, 17:52:55 UTC
Thank you so much! :-D I was a little worried about the pacing, so I'm glad to see it worked out all right. Thank you for reading and commenting!

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