Aw, that was your first time *ducks and runs* ^_^ Pretty fast, but the brutality was got across well and I can't see anything physically implausible happening (not that I know much about sex either ^^). (As often happens, I don't know the fandom at all.) What sort of subject is Systems? Is it computing systems or something else?
nice fic ... writing sex takes a lot of practice and trial and error, but keep at it! I've been working on a new Yama/Kai for over a month but it still has a long way to go!
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Pretty fast, but the brutality was got across well and I can't see anything physically implausible happening (not that I know much about sex either ^^). (As often happens, I don't know the fandom at all.)
What sort of subject is Systems? Is it computing systems or something else?
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:D
I had to make it fast or else I'd have wimped out.
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Mmm.
Systems is the path to engineering. Using computers to design and test things.
Full Metal Jacket is an ace movie, you should watch it!
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For someone who's going to hell for writing gay Vietnam rape, I'm exceptionally happy.
Oooh, I'd love to see your Yama/Kai when it's done!
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