[Dong Bang Shin Ki] A Man Who Wasn't There [3/?]

[kai_yukashi]

Chapter 3

He who fights monsters should look into it that he himself does not become a monster. When you gaze long into the Abyss, the Abyss also gazes into you.

-Friedrich Nietzsche

Park Yoochun threw open the door to his office with a bang, impatiently shrugging off his suit jacket and loosening his tie.  It was

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[rainbowpebbles]

su - towel = yoochun with a nose-bleed ^-^

yunnie isn't lucky. it's just that jaeho ATTRACT! haha! and the way you described jaejoong was PERFECT. it's quite difficult to describe how jaejoong is 'beautiful', but i think you did great!

update soon! can't wait for yoosu and jaeho interaction :D

[orionsroad]

Woot! Love this. The description and the sort of slightly dark/gritty feel to the world is lovely. And hahaha, Su. XD Teach you to answer the door in a towel - there might be handsome police men hanging around shiftily. XD

Ah! So Joongie is a high class escort/host guy. :D Or else he buys high class escorts from there. But I'm thinking the former, because of the make up and the dead john and what not. I don't blame Mr Jinho for taking a liking for boys if that what his wife and daughter are like! And of course, if it's Joongie, then well, who could resist? Obviously someone didn't like the interested Jinho was paying our msyterious Jae though. Hope 'He' doesn't make trouble for Yunnie! :D Can't wait for more!

[fuu_luv_tofu]

Finally something come up with the couples!!! I've been wondering about the mystery so much that I forgot about the JaeHo and YooSu bits...at least this was better!!!

Su~~ answering the door with just a towel on...thought it was Yunho? XP
Yoochun~~ you will surely change your view about liking only women this time!!! ;)
Yunho have been through many bars before which means he have met Jaejoong somewhere before? That bar is not normal...not to mention only rich people go there, so does Jaejoong work there...or is he a customer?

I will wait for the next update!!! It really doesn't look pretty with the couples for I don't expect happy ending in this at all...
I'm not good in guessing mystery stuff so I'll just wait to find out more...If I guess any more I think I might get the whole idea wrong >

[smellsliketheta]

Way to make an entrance Junsu XD! Can't wait to see what Yoochun is going to do now...heh heh heh

To cut it short, Lee Jinho was not well liked, but unfortunately no one even know him well enough to dislike him either. To my head, that made lots of happy sense. ahh..yeah.. 8D I really like how the case is unfolding!

And how Jaejoong is a man in every sense except for appearance :D

Hooray! Can't wait to see what will happen :)

[geleeober]

yay, new chapter. Yoochun found the wrong apartment. I'm curious about the relationship beteen Junsu, Yunho, and Jaejoong/Min. They know each other, but Yunho doesn't remember. ahh, i want to find out. I love this story. also, i think the killer is someone who does not want any man get close to Jaejoong, or not. that's the only guess i have so far.

[kai_yukashi]

nah, Yoochun found the right apartment, but you'll see why Junsu's there in the next chap. Remember what Junsu said as he opened the door? That should be a clue (albeit a bit vague I suppose) as to why Junsu's there. XD

Man, it's so strange I'm reading everyone's comments, and I'm fairly bursting with the need to confirm or unconfirm some of the suspicions, but I clearly CAN'T. I can't even give tiny little explanations as to what's going on because each moment and many things that I might've mentioned only briefly might play a big role later. ^^;;; I just wish i could write faster (more time to write, for that matter) so i could have more scenes involving people aside from Yunho and Yoochun.

Anywayz, thanks for all the comments~~~

[geleeober]

ok, i will try to pay close attention to every little things. i know that i can't wait for the next chapter, but take your time. I, and icluding all other people, will live.