[Dong Bang Shin Ki] A Man Who Wasn't There [7/?]

Jul 23, 2007 01:49



Chapter 7

Believe those who are seeking the truth.  Doubt those who finds it.

- Andre Gide (1869 - 1951)

"Welcome back, hyung," Changmin greeted as soon as Jaejoong stepped through his apartment door.

"Yah, why are you up already?" Jaejoong immediately began, toeing his shoes off hastily and moving ( Read more... )

dong bang shin ki, fanfic, wasn't there, jaeho, horror, yoosu, mystery

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alexandracwz July 23 2007, 09:23:27 UTC
SPOT!

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alexandracwz July 23 2007, 09:46:32 UTC
Yay! I'm first! OMG. You've finally updated! xD
Why do I have a suspicious feeling that Chang Min's the murderer? Why did he murder when he's not Jae Joong' boyfriend? Maybe he's just really close with Jae Joong and consider Jae Joong as an older brother/hyung? I don't want Chang Min to go to jail but I have this weird feeling that he's the murderer! Or maybe I'm just imagining things? >.<
Is Yunho with Junsu? Because I don't understand why he forbid Yoo Chun from seeing Junsu. It's so sad that Yoo Chun composed that song for Junsu (but he didn't know it was Junsu) but Junsu backed out at the last minute, on the brink of stardom. WHY?! So many questions yet so little answers. But I'm sure sure you'll reveal them in future chapters in due time.
I like your writing, very descriptive and vivid and the plot's really good though a bit confusing. Nice chapter! Update soon! ^^

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redmist_23 July 23 2007, 10:10:49 UTC
Hmph... Changmin is not as innocent as everyone thought.

Yunho is so protective of Junsu (was he hurt before at some point by Yunho enemies before?), interesting to see how the Yoosu will develop in this case.

Do update soon.

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vrilly July 23 2007, 10:39:44 UTC
Hi! Thanks for the update. I enjoyed the Yoosu and Jaeho hints in here. Your writing is brilliant and the story intrigues me. I thought Changmin might be the murderer. BUT. Since Yunho and Yoochun suspect that... I don't know I predict there will be more twists coming up soon.

Update soon!!! <33

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oncloud999 July 23 2007, 10:46:41 UTC
update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hmm, i wonder what the relationship between Junsu and Yunho really is... It does seem like they're more than just friends... but then, Yunho also seems interested in Jae...? and Junsu didn't seem completely unresponsive to Yoochun either... hmmmmmmmmm.....

and i like this whole thought processing thing, so don't worry about no action!! i mean, with all that's been going on, it's nice to have a chapter to sum up everything. =D

gah, this is so interesting!! can't wait for the next chapter!! ♥

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twiglet71 July 23 2007, 10:47:42 UTC
What an interesting story. Love it when you update. I can't believe our little MIn would do anything wrong!!!! Can't wait or next chapter xxx

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