[Dong Bang Shin Ki] Be Glad [ONESHOT]

[kai_yukashi]

Title: Be Glad
Author: kai_yukashi
Length: Oneshot
Rating: PG
Genre: mild angst
Pairing: one-sided Yoosu
Summary: Yoochun is glad.

Note: attempting to destroy a wall.  Mostly rambling of a not-quite-there man.  Unbetaed.

Yoochun thinks that he is glad he is in Dong Bang Shin Ki, and not some other boy bands with five members, or four members, or

Comments

[xiao_tian_jelly]

But Yoochun is the master at self delusion and so he conveniently misplace these memories, and he thinks he is glad.

that phrase draws the line between sweet fluff and mild angst!

ILOVEIT! ♥

[fembruno]

You kill me.

I love the grammar here. "he thinks he is glad" would be waaay too narrow if you ruined it with a comma in between. Leaving it cut open like that was pure art.

"Junsu is in Dong Bang Shin Ki and Hyukjae is in Super Junior, two separate bands who almost never ever meet up" ----this shows so much want!

"with only four possible pairings, Yoosu have a twenty five percent chance of happening" --- obsessive & burning!!

"Junsu is at the far edge whose closest contact is only Yoochun" --- WOW. The language about Junsu being "FAR" has more than one meaning, I felt!

:'-D

[fxckinmyway]

Ouch, this was so sad it makes me feel so... Ouch.
This was so well-written, especially the 2nd paragraph. And the last line, the last line. T_T

[sae_chan]

I love how Chunnie loves Su so much....
But... *huggles Chunnie* I'm glad he's glad although it's only his delusions... ^_^
Maybe you could do a Su one as well? ^___^

[keight_michelle]

Ouch. My heart... T_____T

That was very well-written and simply heartwrenching.. I feel for Chunnie.. I really do.. ♥