I love how it made my heart ache but at the same time it gave me a sense of hope. It was like in paragraph one there was so much sadness but I get a glimpse of hope in paragraph two where this person at least has a dream. Then some more dolefulness in paragraph three, only to be conquered by determination in paragraph four. Absolutely amazing.
Favorite line of the free write: "Meek minds filled with a mission, hateful hearts with their power trip pulses that seek to control."
Your free-writes are the highlights of my days. I miss talented writers. :] Comment bubble
(I already put this on your buzznet, but I feel more comfortable on here, so I'm deleting it there.) (P.s.... Yes I am weird)
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It was like in paragraph one there was so much sadness but I get a glimpse of hope in paragraph two where this person at least has a dream. Then some more dolefulness in paragraph three, only to be conquered by determination in paragraph four. Absolutely amazing.
Favorite line of the free write: "Meek minds filled with a mission, hateful hearts with their power trip pulses that seek to control."
Your free-writes are the highlights of my days. I miss talented writers. :]
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(I already put this on your buzznet, but I feel more comfortable on here, so I'm deleting it there.) (P.s.... Yes I am weird)
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