[FIC] Safe Haven (part 1) -- Star Trek, S/K

[kain_was_here]

Fandom: Star Trek (NEW!)
Pairing: S/K Spork (hinted so far)
Rating: PG (so far)
Summary: Not the usual crack. H/C....? it was written for this promp: So what I would like is a post-movie fic where Kirk, after the adrenaline wears off (this can be immediately after they escape the pull of the anomaly or hours or even a day later, I don't care)

Comments

[kain_was_here]

*ponders*

this is a good idea....hmmmm......

but...the angst and then how...GAH. too tired to figure it out! (this style of fic is too hard to write! they actually need a REASON to get it on whereas most of the time in other styles I can just make one of them horny and run with it.)

[nova_bright]

This is such a lovely fic! It's so funny, because in all my other fandoms I've been like h/c? pfffft. But in this fandom, I am all over h/c in all it's forms, and you've written it so well, and with such good characterisation.

Good job! :D

(Also yes. Sex tiems ahoy!)

[outofthisplace]

This needs a bit of a beta-ing, but, Awwww!!! And yes, try your hand at the sexin, can't hurt, yeah? I mean, where is the other logical place for this to go?

[kain_was_here]

D:

I didn't even give it a second look (lol)

i COULD beta my own stuff...but i'm soooo lazy....

ask Spock, I'm sure he'd come up with something (it IS his forte)

[outofthisplace]

Eeeehhh, there's been way too much "I cannot leave your side or stop rubbing circles on your back or let you sleep on me" for this to not logically end in sexing.
SPAG issues are not major, is ok, I am just vaguely a grammar nazi. Well, a little more polite than nazi. Maybe grammar Cardassian.

[kain_was_here]

D; I too am one of the Nazis. I therefore attempt to avoid reading my own fic....because i wince and cuss like there's no tomorrow, and people wonder what's wrong with me when i randomly scream "TYPO FUCK IT!" in the library....

I LITERALLY did that today. I'm not kidding. In real life. In the library.... (i guess it was more of a shout than a scream, and i managed to quiet myself down by the 'fuck it' bit, but still...)

[speccygeekgrrl]

Oh man. I read this over at the kink meme and I absolutely adore it. Spock ignoring everything to take care of his captain is such sweet, 'deal with it, you're my responsibility now' win! I love it so much!

While I am a big fan of slow, dramatic, super-trusting sex, the decision is up to you! If you don't think you're ready to try it, don't worry, fangirls have vivid imaginations for filling in fade-to-blacks! :D

If you don't mind the suggestion, having a beta to clean up your typos would make the story a little easier to read, and I'm totally willing to do it since I brought it up and all. (sorry, I'm a beta-reader for Heroes fandom, it's something I suggest... and I mean it in the most respectful, helpful way, not critically!)

[kain_was_here]

2nd comment suggesting a beta:

I AM GOING TO RE-READ AND RE-POST. (this is driving me insane)

following that, please do have your way with it. If there's more grammar effing when i'm done i'll want to shoot myself, but nonetheless would love your help with corrections. ^^

[dancingdragon3]

Oooo, I really liked this. It's so good, it's almost better than sex. I am big into hurt/comfort though. Either way, I would love to see more. Thanks!

[kain_was_here]

*blush* better? XD

okay! it will be worked on.

but i'm kinda at a loss (besides the sex) since i really have nowhere to go with this....(plot? what's that? D: can i get sum?)