[FANFIC] Takes 001, 002, 003 -- Kirk/Bones -- Star Trek

[kain_was_here]

Fandom: Star Trek
Title: (compilation) Takes 001, 002, and 003
Pairing: Kirk/Bones
Rating: Pg-13 (R soon)
Summary: A compilation of little first-person glimpses from both Kirk and Bones. Written for the prompt "James T. Kirk is a very successful young actor who primarily stars in high box-office earning action movies. He's currently filming his

Comments

[cedarrapidsgirl]

I love it! And how am I supposed to get my laundry folded reading something like this? More please!

[kain_was_here]

gurl, fold ur laundry. XD (I just wrote parts 2 and 3 of this between 5:00 am and 6:30 am. And now it's 8:00 and I still haven't slept. WHen I wake up sometime this afternoon, I will probably write more of this. ^^)

[cedarrapidsgirl]

heh. The joys of staying up late and sleeping in. No more for me! I got that laundry folded, and got more in the washer. I have plenty to do while I wait. And wait I shall! Thanks for writing!

[kain_was_here]

i become noctournal when there are no morning classes. ah, summer. (I'm gonna die if my sleep patterns stay this effed up when the fall semester starts....D:> Starting college classes! On top of dancing and acting and soccer)

but if you keep commenting...I might write another bit of this....because I really want them to get to the smexing. we'll see what transpires.

[smilingskull]

Oh man, this is so massivley awesome! :D I love how well this all works.

[deepsorskies]

You just killed me with the way you wrote Bones drifting into the character he plays (and out of it). The rest is amazing, too, but this part totally blew me away.

I love this 'verse you created here. More please! (I could get addicted)

[kain_was_here]

oh GOOD *sighs in relief*

the 'in character, out of character' part worried me slightly. One of those things that makes sense in my own head, but I'm not sure if i've made it accessible to anyone else. (Because I wanted the feeling of the scene, when you're completely absorbed in the movie, and everything feels real, and what's not there in props [like smells] your brain injects to validate the situation)

XD thanks so much! I'm rather enjoying it myself....mmmmmmm....bunnies for the next part are already bothering my brain.

[deepsorskies]

I felt it was a great representation of what an actor might actually feel who is used to a very empathic, emotionally involved style of acting. I recently took part in a theatre project and a lot of the actors involved were the "you gotta feel it" kind of actors. I can totally imagine them merging with their roles in the way your Bones does here.

*pets and feeds the bunnies for they shall be fruitful and multiply*

[siluria]

Oh, this so needs more..... so much more!!!!! :)

[shadowclub]

I loved the tension between them! Jim's really quite subtle, isn't he?