[FANFIC] PART 1: Angels -- Kirk/Mccoy

[kain_was_here]

Fandom: Star Trek 2009
Title: Angels PART 1 (Yes, I'm using the withing temptation song. D: I couldn't think of anything)
Pairing: Kirk/Mccoy
Rating: NC-17 for thematic elements, graphic details, language (no sex this part yet)
Warnings: AU, graphic/disturbing situations (neil gaiman/orson scott card-esque), prostitution, THIS IS A REALLY FREAKING

Comments

[kain_was_here]

oh noes!

thanks for the tip!

[lisamariedavis]

I have such a weakness for fics of this nature and you have me so hooked.

Update soon, please.

[kain_was_here]

XD

but it's so loooooong already....(<--still hasn't slept. it's eleven twenty in the afternoon)

[blcwriter]

This is already fabulous. Looking forward to more.

[lunasv]

I like the premise, but, and take this in the concrit spirit it's offered, it needs a beta read for grammar and typos.

[kain_was_here]

(Yeah, because I DIDN'T EVEN READTHROUGH BEFORE POSTING. BECAUSE I AM EVIL LIKE THAT. I apologize for the hurting of your eyes. D:> I just wanted to put it all down, iono, this is probably a horrible habit. IT WILL BE EDITED, and i do catch most mistakes when I'm being serious.)

[lunasv]

It's a me thing ... I edit for a living. *g*

[kain_was_here]

that's totally fine! I'd probably get pissed at my own fic (even if I wasn't the author) because of all the typos...they ruin flow and continuity and EVERYTHING.

BUT I STILL MAKE THEM. I AM ONLY HUMAN. DDDD:> (I fixed the first two pieces, if you want to go back and reread. THEY ARE BETTER NOW.)

[xbeax]

it needs to be polished a little bit, but the premise is interesting. :)

btw, you need to fix your formatting and place it under an lj-cut. ^^