[Fic] Help Me Get Him? [1/2]

Mar 28, 2013 00:05

Not sure if anyone will read, but here we go.

Part 1 )

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mikantoringo March 28 2013, 01:31:55 UTC
this really made my day!
Good start and really interesting, I'd like to see how things will go. I'm all curious here..
Please update soon

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kairi_yume March 28 2013, 15:08:46 UTC
I'm happy to hear that ^^ Thanks so much for reading~

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eadwine63 March 28 2013, 12:38:56 UTC
I think this was a little confusing...
with the flashbacks not really looking like a flashback to me. I mean, sometimes I was like "wait this isn't right?"
Also, I found a little detail that was wrong. Unless Gackt drives a Western-style car, he'd put the food on the passenger side, which is on the left and not on the right.

But it was funny and sounded very much like you so well done! ^_^

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kairi_yume March 28 2013, 15:15:43 UTC
Yeah, it's not all that clear. I've been picking at this fic for awhile that I just wanted to get it done with and posted up. Sorry it's confusing >.<
I even looked it up to be sure, so I probably typed it as right coz I was trying to remember that the driver was on the right. Will correct it~

You mean a lot of dialogue? :P Thanks for reading <3

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bluemarina6195 March 28 2013, 14:19:57 UTC
It's nice to see you updating again!
I pratically giggled as I read this, luckily I'm alone in the room, otherwise I'd be told to be crazy xD It was an interesting read. The story and dialogs are hilarious as always. I'm looking forward to the continuation :D

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kairi_yume March 28 2013, 15:17:15 UTC
Thanks for reading! Yay someone got some laughs out of it ^^

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bluemarina6195 May 4 2013, 06:25:22 UTC
just so you know, I'm still waiting for the next part.… _(:3 」∠)_

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annui March 28 2013, 19:17:20 UTC
Hnnggghhh I'm very happy this very early morning. Thank you for writing again dearie~ I really missed your writing ♥

I love how hyde always seemed so innocent in your fics. I mean, really hyde? Sakura is naked for God's sake! XDDD

Btw, why Gackt has to be careful about Hyde? Is Hyde a famous artist here? :D;;

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kairi_yume March 29 2013, 10:57:16 UTC
This wasn't what I really want to write but I'm glad you enjoyed it nonethelss ^^

He does? He's just confused here because a friend is randomly naked for no reason. At least, to him :P

The fic is AU but they're still sort of themselves, so Gackt and Hyde are well-known. Sorry the fic isn't clear ^^; *hides in a dark corner*

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annui March 29 2013, 17:18:53 UTC
I did!! ♡

Haha that's so adorable and innocent in my eyes, just make you want to huggles and kidnapped him 8DD

I know it's AU, that's why I'm asking because it's Gackt's words that made me wonder.. (when he had conversation about You knew he dates Hyde) :DD
Lol, *joins you*

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kairi_yume April 2 2013, 14:09:56 UTC
I think Hyde always makes us wanna huggles and kidnap him XD

Maybe I should make it clearer whether they are musicians or not ^^;

(Kidnap Hyde to the dark corner too? :P)

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yuki_kumi March 30 2013, 13:51:01 UTC
I definitely read your fic ! Although a little late to write a comment, sorry (>_<)
Btw first, whyyyyyyyy tetsuya and sakura lol I really can't see them as a couple XDD
And the missunderstanding between hyde and gackt ahfksbfkaj hyde you bakaaaa, no wonder gackt feels insecure X'DDD
Update part 2 soon pleaseee, I really miss your fics ^^

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kairi_yume April 2 2013, 14:11:56 UTC
Thanks for reading it ^^
Lol...the idea came about when lunafair wanted drummer fics. But I wanted to sneak in Gackt and Hyde, so had to pair Sakura with someone else.
I'll try to get it up soon :D

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