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Dec 17, 2007 14:52

Title: Not The Perfect Kiss
Author: Me - Liesel
Pairing: Ricky/Nick
Warnings: Substance Abuse, Language, Slash, Scenes Of A Sexual Nature, Angst. Kind of a dark fic.
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Kaiser Chiefs or control their actions. This did not happen. (At least not to my knowledge.)
Summary: Nick takes Ricky out. They kiss. But nothing is ( Read more... )

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clumsy_heart_x December 18 2007, 00:34:42 UTC
Oh wow.

That was intense...
You shouldn't regret posting this, really.

I friggin loved it. So different from all the other Nick/Rick stories out there. There should be more 'dark' fics out there (though it may not be what most people like).

This community cannot die people! I've been really busy with school, but I'll work on some fics during the holidays. Might try a bit of angst.

Now Im rambling...

Great fic.

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xlieselx December 18 2007, 11:06:23 UTC
Thanks! You have no idea how nervous I was a second before reading these comments.

I can't believe how slow this community has been recently but I've got plenty more in the pipeline (especially as I've escaped school due to flu this week).

Good luck with anything your working on, I can't wait to read it.

Thanks for your great comment, means a lot. x

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lemursexbot December 18 2007, 04:40:03 UTC
Man, that was sad and dark and spicy all mixed toegther. very good.

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xlieselx December 18 2007, 11:07:04 UTC
Thanks, you've both made me feel a mile better about this thing, I really was unsure about posting it.

x

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ammee_bliss March 19 2009, 14:42:32 UTC
‘See, you’re all soft.’ Ricky laughed. I moved my lips towards his once more he grabbed my face and pulled me closer.
‘Not all of me.’ I whispered in his ear, guiding his free hand down my stomach to my groin, the growing hardness there.
That's genius!! Very well written. *nods*

I pressed my shaking lips to his; kissing his cold, stiff lips as hard as I could. Wishing life back into him. It wasn’t the perfect kiss, but it was a kiss and it was with him.
Now this is really heart-breaking! :(
Very well written though! The last sentence just really kills, as it had been giving a meaning before.

Well done! xx

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chrisycrazy May 18 2012, 09:46:12 UTC
Hi,xlieselx.

Ive noticed that it has been a long time that u posted the fic "Not The Perfect Kiss" and i dont know if u still use this account.But i admire your work and would like to ask u to give me the permission to translate this fic into chinese.if u see this post.Could u give me the permission to do so?

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