[A26] CROSSING CURVES AND CIRCLES (TO GET TO YOU) (3/4)

Jul 25, 2016 20:27





Prompt Code: A26
Title: Crossing Curves and Circles (to get to you)

Crossing Curves and Circles (to get to you): Part 3 )

category: a, round 1: 2016

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anonymous July 26 2016, 08:32:14 UTC
Wow, congratulations for finishing 30k+ words fic! That's a lot of work, I believe ( ... )

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anonymous July 26 2016, 12:39:49 UTC
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vavole July 26 2016, 12:52:40 UTC
I like single parent!au and, as expected, I liked this story.
I was really curious about Jongin confessing his love for Kyungsoo to his friends, I wish we could have read more of that. I guess I would have understood better Jongin's friends sudden acceptance of Kyungsoo.
Eunmi is an adorable child and I can understand why Jongin wanted to spend more time with her and be there for her and Kyungsoo. Glad they found their happy ending! Thanks for sharing this story with us :)

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anonymous July 26 2016, 23:37:39 UTC
i hate jongin, luhan, baekhyun and chanyeol, jongin was a jerk in the beginning but i loved how his character changed, he was soooo sweet with soo's little girl (and with soo)!!
i took a loooong time to read this but i don't regret it, it was amazing!! thank you for writing this monster fic (what did i do to deserve this //cries//)
althought some parts were a bit messy, overall, everything was cute <3 (sorry for my broken english)

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ext_3743987 July 27 2016, 13:49:37 UTC
I'm sorry but you're going to hate me after this. I liked your fic but I do have a problem with it, but first I'm gonna say things I liked. This was a sweet story and well written. And I loved that Kyungsoo had a child. It made this different from other bullying fics. And now the bad stuff. I can't understand why Kyungsoo forgave them. Bullying isn't something you can take lightly. Sure they apologised and gave the money back but that doesn't make up for the things they did. And Jongin bullied Kyungsoo because he liked him? That's just wrong in so many levels. My best friend was bullied through middle school but I didn't know about it because we were in different classes and had different schedules and she never told me. She was left with deep scars that affect her life until now, 10 years later. She hates her bullies and won't be able to forgive them, ever. And neither can I. It hurst me everytime when she has panic attacks because of her bullies and I can't do anything about it. That's why I have so strong feelings about bullying ( ... )

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