[J04] CATCH YOU (I'M TRYING)
Prompt Code: J04
Title: Catch You (I'm Trying)
Rating: R
Word Count: 4289
Warning: abo dynamics
Summary: Jongin is trying to catch Kyungsoo, but is failing.
AN: Hello prompter, this is my first fluff kaisoo ever, i'm not sure if it meets your expectation but hopefully you could enjoy the fic
( Jongin got hit by a ball to the face several times that day because he kept blanking out, missing so many good opportunities to make a goal. )
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It's really cute to see how they actually behave the opposite way as compared to their given ranks, with Kyungsoo being so assertive and firm and Jongin being so shy and sorta insecure when it comes to Kyungsoo kekeke. Kyungsoo was even the one who initiated the mate!!!!! ASDFGHJKL It's really nice to see the two of them being written in a non-mainstream way; I don't think I can ever get over shy alpha Jongin around confident Omega Ksoo tbh :')))))) And it was really sweet for Jongin to be so considerate of Kyungsoo and even attempting to pull away and he felt so bad when he thought he took advantage of Kyungsoo being in heat aigoooooooo such a sweet child hehe.
And Kyungsoo's iconic line in this fic definitely has to be “If I tell you that you had a nice pair of shoes does that mean I wanted to fuck your shoes?” I cracked up so much over that line I have no idea why; I just found it super funny ( ... )
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i'm glad you enjoyed it yo i really like writing them like this myself. jongin being all silly and hopelessly in love with feisty ksoo who's oblivious to his feelings. i truly love writing it
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omg im just ssu happy that i did an alright fluff?? idk i've been associating kaisoo as that angsty couple (more bec i read too many angsty fic about them) therefore it's a bit difficult to put them in a sweet situation. im glad this turns out good
Thank you for the comment okei you really made my day, month, year and centuries.
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I like their dynamic and Jongin was just so adorable <3
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you manage to write how i imagined it to be! i definitely love the super fluffiness of the fic and the way you portrayed the clumsy!nini and feisty!ksoo accurately! i'm so blessed *tears in my eyes* and their cute little interactions in the library had me puke rainbows :((((( my baby jongin had to sacrifice his precious forehead for ksoo awww baby *coos*
the beagle line antics YAAASSS GET IT YES!! +111 the smut part tho OH HOT DAMN MAMA that was beautiful i had to bite my mouth to refrain from screaming too loud!!
AND THE RIMMING OH LORD THAT WAS UNEXPECTED YAS YAS YASSSSS hOLuY hSIT_----- ++++++++++++11111111111 !111!!1!!
let me end my comment with the self-proclaimed best/iconic line in the fic:
“If I tell you that you had a nice pair of shoes does that mean I wanted to fuck your shoes?”ISTG DEADDDD YOU DON'T MESS WITH THE ( ... )
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so precious
omg but really tho. i really love your prompt bec through that, i figured that i have soft spot for clumsy jongin and feisty kyungsoo. feisty kyungsoo, especially. but then he can't help but falling for the human puppy.
thank you for the sweet comment. fyi i keep smiling reading your comment, and person near me think im chatting my crush when in fact, it;s better bec my prompter being really sweet and precious to me cries
*sending kisses via sky so it cud reach u*
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