Comments | kaisoobiography: Everlasting #27: House of Cards [Part 2/2]

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Everlasting #27: House of Cards [Part 2/2]

Mar 29, 2017 21:00

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jonginspuppy April 2 2017, 06:32:15 UTC

It's great! But I don't know the right word to describe their relationship, I'm afraid I'll use the wrong word.
They find themselves in each other. I like how Jongin was taking care of Kyungsoo while taking care of himself. It's really difficult in my opinion. But I guess Kyungsoo helped him in someway.
Kyungsoo... oh thank god after that conversation he felt better and his "freezing feet" got me so happy. AND THE STEP HE TOOK TO JONGIN AT THE EPILOGUE. ok.
This is really a touchy subject that I'm afraid I'll offend someone if my kadi feels are too much on this hehe.

aerinikolai April 11 2017, 03:32:51 UTC

Thank you! It was an amazing ride for me, and I was afraid, too on how to tackle whatever touchy contents I've written in House of Cards. I guess it's difficult to describe this relationship. No worries on those feels, I understand! (And the fact the you left a comment means so much already!)

gellis813 April 5 2017, 02:12:34 UTC

This had me feeling all sorts of things. Jongin broke my heart. Kyungsoo tore it to shreds at the beach scene. He was so fcuked up pleading and begging Jongin to take him out. Jeez I can't even begin to tell you how much that fcuked with me.
I was so happy this ended on a brighter note with Kyungsoo finally finding hope and the will to go on. Even though it messed with my emotions thank you for a wonderful story.

aerinikolai April 11 2017, 03:35:16 UTC

Thank you! You have to forgive me for breaking your heart in a few scenes! I'm so glad that you liked it.

tintinepots April 7 2017, 03:44:42 UTC

I felt this. I felt the struggle. I felt the pain. I felt the want to move on. I felt the need to help soo get back frlm his slump.

Thia has made me a mess of feels but it has been beautiful. Jongin who has been struggling with his own still went out of his way for Soo.

I cant fully express how this has affected me and how elated i am that they are on their way to get better by the end. Sigh

aerinikolai April 11 2017, 03:37:08 UTC

It's on a different level when readers invest this much emotion. I'm honored to have written something that tugged your heart. Thank you. Thank you so much.

vavole April 9 2017, 09:13:08 UTC

Wow, I'm not okay... this was a journey and an emotional roller coaster. You wrote this story beautifully. It's raw, emotional, frightening, intense, honest ( ... )

aerinikolai April 11 2017, 03:45:32 UTC

I've been typing and deleting my reply as I don't know how to begin but let me start by saying thank you. Thank you for giving this fic a chance and reading it. I'm glad that I was successful, somehow, in sending my message across. It's probably because Jongin is a reflection of my struggles as well that I was able to portray these in truth, and it's because of that, that this fic has come to life. Indeed, it's not the people around us can't fix us, but know that you just hung a star in this writer's dark sky. Thank you, too, for leaving a heartwarming comment. It means so much.

This is far from beautiful, but I'm thankful enough that you find that it is.

this is awesome! ext_3547936 April 10 2017, 07:32:24 UTC

This fic is very beautiful and inspiring. Thank you authornim for giving me courage and hope to face the challenges i'm facing right now. T_T

RE: this is awesome! aerinikolai April 11 2017, 03:48:05 UTC

Thank you! I wrote this thinking of people like you who are in need of a heads up. I hope whatever struggles or challenges you're facing, you find hope and strength to win and overcome. If you need a boost, a friend, I may be a stranger but know that at least one random girl online cares. I'm a DM away if you need someone to talk to.