#66: there’s a universe inside of you (part 2)

[thegloryboys]

Comments

[matchynishi]

oh wow this was so beautiful! you got that dreamy air here, and aaah it was so nice!

[anonymous]

Your story is so poetic. You described the atmosphere, the characters and their feelings so well.
It was very cute, and hot ;) A true romantic love story!
Thank you for writing and sharing~

[anonymous]

Oh my, i really love this. All that love in the air makes me giddy :) I just love how smitten they are with each other. You wrote it so beautifully.

[pretttyboys]

ahh i really enjoyed reading this so much. i think i can even say it's my favourite. honestly, i'm a nerd for any model aus and a bigger nerd for the model x photographer aus and this even had jongin taking pictures of taemin and - yes yes!! take all the pictures!! i loved how we got to see them as strangers and then something undefined ("friends" jongin thinks) and then finally lovers. and the writing style is gorgeous really! all the metaphors and how it all flows are really beautiful.

"taemin is an altar of dark hair and golden skin, and jongin wonders if taemin cries the white wisps of the milky way when he comes, stars threading with his lashes." // it is safe to say i gasped out loud when i read that part.

thank you for sharing this with us!! it was really amazing ;; i loved it a lot

[sanja994]

absolutely wonderful piece! everything is so beautiful, feels like floating above clouds, if that makes sense. :) I really like the flow of the story and how you portrayed the progress of their relationship, combined with some pretty amazing metaphors. :))