#81: Baby, talk to me

Jul 07, 2016 00:11

Title: Baby, talk to me
Rating: PG-13
Sidepairings: none
Word Count: 2,038
Warning(s): insecurities
Prompt: #81 Jongin and Taemin are in love, but not in an exclusive r/s. Jongin just wants a taste of freedom and travels alone frequently, but realises he hasn't truly found his happiness, whom he often leaves behind.
Author's notes: Dear prompter, I ( Read more... )

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atomickitten03 July 7 2016, 15:06:59 UTC
This was adorable! It's funny because I've always pictured them the other way around, you know; Taemin being the non-commiting one, very fond of his freedom, and Jongin being clingy and homesick all the time and, well... Jongin-y. So the prompt had interested me from the get-go. But the way you put it, it makes sense! It was very sweet, and I love the idea of Taekai discovering the world together! <3

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yuraxchan July 19 2016, 14:57:39 UTC
Since the prompt stated Jongin was the one who needed his freedom, I've followed it :) To be honest, I can totally picture Jongin being like this too, with the way he loses himself with dancing. It's a different kind of freedom I guess, but still. Jongin is a free spirit!

I can totally picture TaeKai travelling together, taking selcas and all huhu~

I'm happy you liked my story!

Thank you for reading and commenting <3

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I'm in awe. anonymous July 8 2016, 06:08:03 UTC
So much thought went into this fic, it may be short but the characters were captured so well; as a reader I could imagine the back story perfectly, it was sad but I enjoyed it.

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RE: I'm in awe. yuraxchan July 19 2016, 14:58:24 UTC
Your comment is very sweet, thank you very much for reading and commenting <3

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sanja994 July 9 2016, 10:28:41 UTC
This was painfull but perfect nonetheless. My heart always breaks for sad and insecure Taemin, I guess because I normally think he's stronger than Jongin in some way. This is one of my favorite entries. :)

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yuraxchan July 19 2016, 15:01:04 UTC
My heart broke too while I was writing, I can totally relate to Taemin's character ;; Thank you for reading and commenting <3

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I LOVE THIS SO MUCH anonymous July 11 2016, 15:59:32 UTC
Thank you so much for writing this, dear author <3 it had just the right amount of angst that i was looking for and the way you wrote insecure taemin really got me uwu but i'm really happy bc you ended it on a good note \o/ i can imagine jongin and taemin travelling around the world, being adorable and spontaneous, discovering new things together~ GOALS tbh :') *hugs you tight and hands you cookies*

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RE: I LOVE THIS SO MUCH yuraxchan July 19 2016, 15:03:44 UTC
I'm really happy you liked it! I couldn't not write a happy ending, TaeKai are made for each other :3 *hugs you back and shares the cookies with you*

Thank you for your lovely comment <3

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RE: I LOVE THIS SO MUCH anonymous July 28 2016, 12:14:04 UTC
omg lovely author, i forgot to tell you that i was the prompter, 🙈 i'm super extra thankful you wrote this for me <3

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RE: I LOVE THIS SO MUCH yuraxchan August 1 2016, 15:01:51 UTC
I'm ten times more happy that you loved the story then :3 Thank you again for your cute and lovely comment dear prompter ♥

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maajorbitch July 15 2016, 23:49:26 UTC
uwu this was really nice!! I felt that sweet pain, like, something was squishing my heart but I kinda liked it? dk, I just know that I really liked this, and poor Taemin uwu I'm glad the ending was happy though! I cannot bear to read my otp apart lol

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yuraxchan July 19 2016, 15:05:28 UTC
My heart hurt too when I was writing, so I know what you mean! Yay for happy endings!

Thank you for reading and commenting <3

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