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"Thinkin' how you left me for dead, California bound..."

Nov 21, 2010 17:46

Title: "Thinkin' how you left me for dead, California bound..."
Author: kaitism
Genre: angsty AU set about three years or so? in the future
Paring: jongkey (duh)
Rating: PG -13 ish? >_>
Disclaimer: I do not own SHINee or SME and I do not make money with this fanfiction. I also do not own the song "Heels Over Head," its lyrics, or Boys Like Girls.
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keybum, jonghyun, shinee, jongkey, kibum, keyhyun, key, kpop

Comments 6

a_l_e_x_i_e_86 November 22 2010, 04:47:41 UTC

These two oneshots were interesting to read with the POV and seeing the thoughts in comparison.
Did the tension between these two just escalate? That's why they fought? Was it only Kibum's fault?
Did Kibum find Jonghyun ? What happens next?

kaitism November 22 2010, 15:10:50 UTC

Um. The only answer I have for you now is...I don't know. I'm not so good with plotlines, so whenever I write, it comes out as just bits and pieces based off of songs, concepts, etc. So right now, I can only tell you:

1) I didn't really have an idea for what happened before to cause this. My idea was just that Jonghyun is always the douchebag, and Kibum was always the one leaving, and I wanted to change it up. So...I don't exactly know why they fought...

2) No, it wasn't only Kibum's fault. I mean, in real life, it wouldn't be, and here, I'm sure Jonghyun's pigheadedness stubbornness contributed to this.

3) Does Kibum find Jonghyun? I don't know yet. There will likely be a sequel, but no promises.

SORRY FOR THE LONG COMMENT! Dx and for leaving so many questions unanswered...but thanks for reading ~!

a_l_e_x_i_e_86 November 22 2010, 15:15:04 UTC

Don't apologize for the long comment. I just hope you get to write the sequel. - nudge-nudge-

joycekeewy January 25 2011, 20:21:54 UTC

Oh lord THIS needs a Jongkey sequel you hear me ? Wah. Jebal !!

It was “too sunny,” “too hot,” “too blonde,” “too tan.” Huh. Maybe Jonghyun would fit in perfectly… LMAO RDD!Jonghyun ! I laughed hard at this.

Please sequel ohn !? *puppy eyes* /gives pouty Jjong for you.

kaitism January 26 2011, 01:11:01 UTC

i was gonna turn this into a series! i swear!! and then i got....cockblocked by minho? haha no no jkjk more like i got writer's block =.= it will be continued, don't worry! :D

joycekeewy January 26 2011, 05:54:32 UTC

Waaah, series really ? Now I'm ever to just read it all lol.
Hope your writer's block just shoos away quickly ohn !?
I think it means more angst if it's turn into a serie but I would totamy read it !

/dces everywhere.