Fic: Masquerade (Part 1/?)

Apr 07, 2010 08:38

Title: Masquerade (Part 1/?)
Author: kaitmaree77
Rating: M (To be safe, nothing really at that rating yet.)
Warnings: Angst; miscarriage; overall darkness
Summary: Cameron nods and pulls back, leading him to an abandoned corner of the ward and sitting on a bench. “It just hurts.”
Notes: Thanks as always to the most supportive group of friends in fandom ( Read more... )

fic: masquerade, fanfiction

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mae_vaughan April 6 2010, 23:02:37 UTC
You already know how I feel, but this never gets any less haunting and powerful no many times I've read it. I love the depth and the imagery and the short bursts of emotion and... just, the entire concept is going to be so fun to watch you play out.

Awesome beginning, can't wait to see more!

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kaitmaree77 April 10 2010, 21:27:04 UTC
Thank you so much! I appreciate your support (and willingness to beta the unbetable. =p)

<3

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vitawash24 April 7 2010, 02:44:01 UTC
This is so, so gorgeous, Kait. Really beautiful and emotionally intense. Can't wait to see where you go with it.

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kaitmaree77 April 10 2010, 21:27:44 UTC
Thank youuuu! <333 I'm really glad you like it. :)

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enchanter April 7 2010, 07:37:22 UTC
Oh, the *angst*.

I probably shouldn't be saying this, but I can kind of see something like this happening. >.> Given House the show is what it is, it just... wouldn't surprise me. They're always paddling up some shitcreek or another, aren't they? It would seem somehow fitting, for all the sadness such a course of events would entail. :/

Someone's said it about your stories before, but you have a knack for conveying so much with so little. A gesture here, a glance there; your choice of words is just right to create an image - an awesome execution of the 'show, don't tell' principle. Which is why I love it. Even though I ache for them, because *damn*, they do deserve *something* to go right for them, don't they...?

And still, the angst is so delicious. :P Guh.

Can't wait for part 2. <3

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kaitmaree77 April 10 2010, 21:29:05 UTC
Yes the *angst*. =p

LOL, I'm glad that you say it's something you can see happening becaus e it makes me seem less insane. ;)

Thank you so much for your gorgeous comments yet again! I really appreciate you taking the time to read and respond. Means a lot. :)

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meggy_rodriguez April 7 2010, 10:11:45 UTC
There are other parts? *squeeks*
Can't wait.

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kaitmaree77 April 10 2010, 21:29:33 UTC
Yes! =p

Thank you! :)

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spidergirl30 April 7 2010, 12:38:18 UTC
This is so gorgeous beautiful and emotionally intense. Can't wait to see where you go with it. :)

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kaitmaree77 April 10 2010, 21:29:48 UTC
Thank you very much!

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