Songs for "April Showers".

Feb 11, 2007 18:47



Oleander, oleander will you bloom again this spring?
I adored you then I ignored you

Now to me you’re everything

And those white blossoms that you gave freely

Are now just twinkles in your eye

Oh, behold her

Oleander grows on the inside

She will forgive me, for I bring water

A sunny window to sit by

Oleander, I understand her

She’s just waiting for the ( Read more... )

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thunders_shadow February 12 2007, 03:18:31 UTC
Chapter was amazing.

(Just thought I'd let you know)

Cheers ♥
Sam

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frappalatte9 February 17 2007, 07:57:58 UTC
The last chapter was my favorite... Just the way it was written... Like, it would jump around between thoughts, because that's how Lily was feeling, and you force the reader to feel that way, too... which is a good thing.

It's was beautifully done.

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frappalatte9 February 17 2007, 07:59:29 UTC
"It's was"?

Yea... that sentence was not beautifully done.

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kaitsyxo February 18 2007, 18:53:14 UTC
thank you, feedback is always appreciated. and i think the last chapter was my favourite, too. i just feel like i finally managed to have lily evolve some. anyway, hope to hear from you again. :]

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