BREAKING DAWN WRITE-A-THON
MEND THE FAILBOAT.
After reading Breaking Dawn, what do you wish had happened? What do you think should have happened? Hey, what could have happened, if not for various SMeyer-related reasons?
Here's your chance to rewrite the book how you want to, if only in a few little pieces.
( spoilers under cut )
After reading Breaking Dawn, what do you wish had happened? What do you think should have happened? Hey, what could have happened, if not for various SMeyer-related reasons?
Here's your chance to rewrite the book how you want to, if only in a few little pieces.
( spoilers under cut )
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Her hand is winter, frozen snow, but Bella's fingers aren't warmer. She doesn't loosen her hold.
"You'll be fine, Bella. The baby will be fine. I'm here for you."
If this is what it takes to keep the child safe, she'll do it.
She'd do more than this. She'd rip a warm throat out with her own teeth, steel sinking through butter. If it weren't for the baby, she would have done it by now.
But the approach she chooses is soothing angel, wiping a feverish brow with freezing fingers to cool a fever. Dry lips parched for something more than water are temporarily sated by the touch of Rosalie's. A long, manicured hand caresses the overextended belly and underneath, drifting lower to calm the poor sick girl.
If this is what it takes.
"Thank you for being here with me, Rosalie."
A smile (it looks genuine enough to her) with dazzling teeth, quick kiss on her forehead. "I wouldn't be ( ... )
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Thanks for creating this post. I can't wait to read what others write. Hell, I might even try my hand at Twilight fic.
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Hey, you totally should! I'm sure it would be awesome.
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lolol you should read my reaction post. it's ginormous. did you actually buy the book?
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She kept her end of the bargain. She came down from Denali with her sisters, acted amiably to everyone, did not make a fuss a few hours before the ceremony and greeted the bride as courteously as she could manage.
The girl is the embodiment of the blushing bride, complete with pink cheeks, shining eyes and Tanya can smell her virginity a mile away.
She is in next in line and she leans forward to embrace Edward, pressing her breasts fully against his chest and whispers She's very pretty. Edward hands only clutch reflexively against her hips and only does she let go when he maneouvers himself out of her arms. You don't like that anymore, do you?She pretends and lies to herself that this wedding and union is of no consequence to her. She makes herself think that Edward is just a boy she dangled with around because he was attractive and pleased her. But Tanya is nothing less than a great actress. She has experience and can mask and transform herself into a completely different person ( ... )
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oh.
my heart.
way to make me all sad, bb. actually, yeah. this was a seriously amazing fic. ladghdag.
The girl is the embodiment of the blushing bride, complete with pink cheeks, shining eyes and Tanya can smell her virginity a mile away.
and now i'm just staring at this fic with a desolate expression on my face, like...whyyyy? why so awesome?
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hahaha thanks a ton bb <333
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They never get a honeymoon.
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As she turns she bites down hard, leaving another row of teeth marks on her marred lips. Nails press hard into clenched fists. When she wakes up - when her once brown eyes blink black with hunger, she whispers she’s all right, but the truth pours from her mind into his. He hears her for the very first time.
I never wanted to get married.Arms pull her back, Emmett's and Jasper's faces strained, imaginary sweat drips down impossible muscles when she breaks free. The hiking girl never has a chance. She's the third on their long run north. Thin hands close around a tiny throat, ripping, biting, clawing, glowing red ( ... )
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this is breaking dawn. THIS IS WHAT SHOULD HAVE HAPPENED. i swear if smeyer was writing fanfic, why didn't she read good fanfic like this first?
It was when Bella realized she no longer cared for what Tanya and Edward may have done. It was when the flutter of keys and the light hands on the ivory didn’t wrench her heart from her chest. It was when Tanya sighed Edward’s name just audibly with eyes closed and lips perched in a perfect smile.
holy crap. this is beautiful.
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The only image is that of Bella, on the brink of dying.
All he does is think about her.
His world, as unresolved as ever, still functions primarily around her well being.
He falls to his knees, begs to the sky (never to God; he let him and now he will never believe again) that she gets better.
He didn't bother to hear what someone else was begging for.
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She holds her breath for as long as she can underwater.
Three minutes has been her most.
She runs her fingers through her (now wet) matted hair, silently cursing to herself.
Why am I still here?It seemed rational, the time she was escaping Sam, the master puppeteer who cut her strings and left her broken on the floor ( ... )
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BECAUSE IT IS. you've captured jacob/leah perfectly in this. ohh, they should have been canon... D:
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I kept waiting for something, ANYTHING, but no.
SMEYER IS FULL OF DAMN FAIL.
MJackson might enjoy this book though.
Quil/Claire
Nessie/Jacob
Yup, his style.
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noooo.
lol yes smeyer is clearly a closet pedophile. it's a leettle odd.
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