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BREAKING DAWN WRITE-A-THON

Aug 02, 2008 19:53

MEND THE FAILBOAT.

After reading Breaking Dawn, what do you wish had happened? What do you think should have happened? Hey, what could have happened, if not for various SMeyer-related reasons?

Here's your chance to rewrite the book how you want to, if only in a few little pieces.

( spoilers under cut )

meta post, breaking dawn write-a-thon, uc glee

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i'd love to hate your smile - rosalie/bella - pg kaiwynn August 3 2008, 01:29:06 UTC

Also written for the slash-a-thon, but I had too much fun writing it not to share. As far as I'm concerned, this is totally freaking canon.

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Her hand is winter, frozen snow, but Bella's fingers aren't warmer. She doesn't loosen her hold.

"You'll be fine, Bella. The baby will be fine. I'm here for you."

If this is what it takes to keep the child safe, she'll do it.

She'd do more than this. She'd rip a warm throat out with her own teeth, steel sinking through butter. If it weren't for the baby, she would have done it by now.

But the approach she chooses is soothing angel, wiping a feverish brow with freezing fingers to cool a fever. Dry lips parched for something more than water are temporarily sated by the touch of Rosalie's. A long, manicured hand caresses the overextended belly and underneath, drifting lower to calm the poor sick girl.

If this is what it takes.

"Thank you for being here with me, Rosalie."

A smile (it looks genuine enough to her) with dazzling teeth, quick kiss on her forehead. "I wouldn't be ( ... )

Re: i'd love to hate your smile - rosalie/bella - pg mulhollands August 3 2008, 02:26:40 UTC

I haven't finished the book yet, but I've read far enough to see the serious subtext between these two. You captured that perfectly. You've written Rosalie's determination to keep the baby safe in a very powerful way, and we see both sides of the coin here: the fierce protector and the gentle caretaker. I love your characterization of her and how she is with Bella. And if this isn't canon, I don't know what is. Srsly.

Thanks for creating this post. I can't wait to read what others write. Hell, I might even try my hand at Twilight fic.

Re: i'd love to hate your smile - rosalie/bella - pg kaiwynn August 3 2008, 02:28:26 UTC

Thank you! This isn't really how I think of Rosalie, y'know...my fanon version is so much stronger in my mind, without all the baby stuff.

Hey, you totally should! I'm sure it would be awesome.

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Re: i'd love to hate your smile - rosalie/bella - pg kaiwynn August 3 2008, 03:21:02 UTC

THIS IS TOTALLY CANON. IT HAPPENED. I WAS THERE.

thank youuu bb <333

Re: i'd love to hate your smile - rosalie/bella - pg lastupenda August 3 2008, 03:36:28 UTC

I fucking love this.

Rosalie/Bella my one crack pairing.

Dry lips parched for something more than water are temporarily sated by the touch of Rosalie's

jkfhsdkjfhsdhfjka say whut?

<3

Re: i'd love to hate your smile - rosalie/bella - pg kaiwynn August 3 2008, 03:37:14 UTC

oh come on bb they're not a crack pairing, they're canon.

glad you liked <3333

Re: i'd love to hate your smile - rosalie/bella - pg yoursolace August 15 2008, 17:35:04 UTC

kjkfdhjfhdgk OMG I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT. I LOVE IT.

seriously. rosalie/bella was my otp of BD. i was like, CANON, SMEYER, YOU MADE IT C-A-N-O-N. because mormons support lesbianism, of course. GUH, i love this.

Re: i'd love to hate your smile - rosalie/bella - pg kaiwynn August 16 2008, 13:53:51 UTC

I'M SO GLAD BB.

omg, yes. i totally noticed thattt. lol, can you imagine her actually trying to write rosalie/bella? haaaahahaha >:D

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