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kaiwynn

BREAKING DAWN WRITE-A-THON

Aug 02, 2008 19:53

MEND THE FAILBOAT.

After reading Breaking Dawn, what do you wish had happened? What do you think should have happened? Hey, what could have happened, if not for various SMeyer-related reasons?

Here's your chance to rewrite the book how you want to, if only in a few little pieces.

( spoilers under cut )

meta post, breaking dawn write-a-thon, uc glee

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broke my heart and now i'm looking for you - tanya/edward - pg lastupenda August 3 2008, 03:09:45 UTC

She kept her end of the bargain. She came down from Denali with her sisters, acted amiably to everyone, did not make a fuss a few hours before the ceremony and greeted the bride as courteously as she could manage.

The girl is the embodiment of the blushing bride, complete with pink cheeks, shining eyes and Tanya can smell her virginity a mile away.

She is in next in line and she leans forward to embrace Edward, pressing her breasts fully against his chest and whispers She's very pretty. Edward hands only clutch reflexively against her hips and only does she let go when he maneouvers himself out of her arms. You don't like that anymore, do you?She pretends and lies to herself that this wedding and union is of no consequence to her. She makes herself think that Edward is just a boy she dangled with around because he was attractive and pleased her. But Tanya is nothing less than a great actress. She has experience and can mask and transform herself into a completely different person ( ... )

Re: broke my heart and now i'm looking for you - tanya/edward - pg kaiwynn August 3 2008, 03:11:58 UTC

:o

oh.

my heart.

way to make me all sad, bb. actually, yeah. this was a seriously amazing fic. ladghdag.

The girl is the embodiment of the blushing bride, complete with pink cheeks, shining eyes and Tanya can smell her virginity a mile away.

and now i'm just staring at this fic with a desolate expression on my face, like...whyyyy? why so awesome?

Re: broke my heart and now i'm looking for you - tanya/edward - pg lastupenda August 3 2008, 03:18:59 UTC

lol i actually considered deleting the whole thing and just stick around to read other people's fic because i didn't like it.

hahaha thanks a ton bb <333

Re: broke my heart and now i'm looking for you - tanya/edward - pg kaiwynn August 3 2008, 03:20:36 UTC

DON'T DO THAT. EVER. >(

Re: broke my heart and now i'm looking for you - tanya/edward - pg redheaded_muse April 25 2009, 00:28:00 UTC

I agree. NEVER delete your fics. I'm not only reading them but copy-and-pasting them in case you take them down or I can't find them again.

xoxo,
your obsessive fiction groupie :D

Re: broke my heart and now i'm looking for you - tanya/edward - pg nuits_froides August 3 2008, 04:04:19 UTC

I loved this.

Re: broke my heart and now i'm looking for you - tanya/edward - pg lastupenda August 3 2008, 05:39:07 UTC

thanks <333

Re: broke my heart and now i'm looking for you - tanya/edward - pg lostpoisoned August 4 2008, 04:20:58 UTC

MFKJILREJISIORJSEIORJOSIEJRJSEJIOMFIOSEJRSJ.

Nothing else to say.

That was AWESOME.

Re: broke my heart and now i'm looking for you - tanya/edward - pg lastupenda August 4 2008, 04:34:37 UTC

<333 thank you so much!

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